OOOOOOK……. I hear you ….. wow…. I think that the only useful bit I got came from Javy Jared…. but I thank everyone for their honesty and opinion and will be taking another crack at this story. I am determined to make this work, but perhaps I should have gotten the backstory done first. I had planned on introducing it into the next chapter but I can see it has allowed for a lot of confusion. So, like I said, try try again.