I am reading your pirate story right now and you can see my critique on that there. While you're at it, why not check out my own pirate story, Pirates of Equestria. This is not a ponyfication of the Pirates of the Caribbean but rather a story more inspired by Assassin's Creed 4: Black Flag.

So... you're a pirate fan, like me eh? Come and have a look at my swashbuckling tale, Pirates of Equestria: Dead Stallion's Chest. It's ponyfication of the movie Pirates of the Caribbean: Dead Man's Chest. So, come and check it out. Please?