Hey... you still here?

Woah woah woah woah!

Hold it right there!

You can't stop now. You're just starting! I liked your story, and I'm sure other do and/or will in the future. Don't give up! I almost did when my first story didn't get alot of attention, but now look. I'm slowly (emphasis on slowly) getting better, and slowly gathering more followers. It just takes time. You know I can always try and help with proof reading, you only need ask. And I'm sure there are many others on this site who would help as well!

Like I said, don't stop! Just press on! And as for copying, well, I'm pretty sure every story is similar to some other story, it's kind of unavoidable. I know I and many others enjoy one-shot sadfics. They're fast to read and with enough work can really stir emotions. If you haven't, check out my story, Wings of Silver, Hearts of Gold. It does just that (or so I'm told), and it didn't just get there. It took some editing, and a little re-writing, but now it is my number one story.

So yeah, I believe in you, and I'm know others will as well. Fight on, fellow brony, fight on!

Hello to everyone who decides they want to read my stories, well don't. They are kinda bad so I suggest you read someone else's stories ya know who writes better than me. Most people have tons of stuff to help them and I just have a plain ol iPad, none of my friends would like reading mlp stories so I can't ask them, what makes my stories bad is the grammar which a lot of people say is terrible I expected that because I don't live in America or United States whatever so my gramma will be quite different. yea I guess I will just stick to drawing ponies which I also don't have fancy colouring and photo scanning for so I might write a story occasionally whether I got inspired or I'm just in a sad mood so if I write a story it will probably be sad cuz I'm feeling sad I might but then it turned out like 2000 words and so dumb and short and I'm sure someone else has a story like it so I might be seen as a copier so don't read my dumb stories read someone who writes good stories and lives in America whatever just don't bother wasting your time with these short dumb ones well bye then

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No, honestly it doesnt seem sad i have to agree

Ah yes. Your story does make more sense now. Good job.

I don't think you should change the tags of your story based on the fact that one person reviewed it. Just because I don't think its sad doesn't mean others won't. But you know, it's really up to you.