So I actually finished writing a whole new story and it's ready for edits and then to be published. If anypony could help me out and read through it, point out errors and other reasons it sucks, I would be much obliged. I even made a list of pros and cons for why you should help me
Pros
Get to read a potentially great story
Get to laugh at what I consider a good idea
Get to point out all the ways I suck at writing