So I actually finished writing a whole new story and it's ready for edits and then to be published. If anypony could help me out and read through it, point out errors and other reasons it sucks, I would be much obliged. I even made a list of pros and cons for why you should help me
Pros Get to read a potentially great story Get to laugh at what I consider a good idea
So I finally stopped lying on the ground making inarticulate noises and wrote a chapter for a story idea I've had for a while. If anypony could help me out and read through it, point out errors and other reasons it sucks, I would be much obliged. I even made a list of pros and cons for why you should help me
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
So kyoot