So I just submitted the prologue of my new story for approval (hopefully I didn't do anything stupid that will get it rejected). If it is approved I just wanted to make a couple of comments about it here. The format of the prologue is a little bit different than that of the rest of the story. There's a reason I called the prologue "Four Vignettes Concerning Loss". Once chapter one is released and so on the flow of the story will be more, well, flowy, and not quite so choppy. This is intentional

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