Something I've always noticed is that sometimes, when you concentrate, something you write seems a lot weaker than normal. Probably because of when you write it. When I originally submitted Unicorn 3, I thought it was good. Then I looked closer.

....yeah I pulled it after, spent weeks on the first two chapters, and have now decided to try it again.

Let's see what happens.

Just completed a rewrite of the last few chapters. Hopefully they'll work a little better.

So my story was about to be completed... then something odd happened. I ended up suddenly gaining a third main character. >_< So I'm in the middle of a rewrite to give him more of a role. This is also gonna result in a retitling.