Something I've always noticed is that sometimes, when you concentrate, something you write seems a lot weaker than normal. Probably because of when you write it. When I originally submitted Unicorn 3, I thought it was good. Then I looked closer.
....yeah I pulled it after, spent weeks on the first two chapters, and have now decided to try it again.
So my story was about to be completed... then something odd happened. I ended up suddenly gaining a third main character. >_< So I'm in the middle of a rewrite to give him more of a role. This is also gonna result in a retitling.