G5: Make Your Mark chapter 5 · 8:42pm Sep 18th, 2023
Unlike in the previous chapters, I don't have much to say, really. I think chapter 4 was better, but not because of superior writing, rather due to focus on plot lines I personally found critical. I'm glad they decided to go with double agent Misty like I wrote in my opinion of Ch4. As for the writing itself, I think Ch 5 is the best so far, and by a LOT, mostly due to containing almost no unnecessary nonsense brought on by characters being dumb. The vast majority of the chapter is Misty's