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537412 k and thanks for the reviewe im also used to using fan names as well so u may see others popping up in storys

K, hope you found my review helpfull , for the amount of time you had to work on it, it's really good. I also really enjoyed the colored writing, it changed things up from the usual blank style . Hope you didn't also find it to harsh, it was all to help you improve, so don't take it the wrong way .
Anyways, keep up the good work!

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Ok, do you want me to post my 'review' here or on the story?