Did you receive my message? If not..

Ohh sorry, I guess I didn't receive a response ( stupid ass iPhone) But yes I WOULD LOVE to edit :D

Because your story isn't looking good there. I kinda like it thought. But the plot line isn't interesting 
Enough to get enough followers.

But, you must understand. If a certain story does not appear appealing for the first time. Not a lot of people give it a chance.

Even if better chapters are made  later on. The problem is, it has appeared badly once. So they won't do give it a chance and read it again.

But maybe I can help you with that

Here's what I'm capable of.

I can easily help you make LONG TERM FUTURE stories that can go for about 200k and 300k words. and I am also online everyday.

I could also point out grammar mistakes. Improve reactions. Basically a little bit of everything.

But I CANNOT do CLOP fics or romance. A little on romance. Like when that certain character should fall in love. Or how that character would fall in love.

I can also only do HiE. But what the certain things I lack. I make up for the incredibly unique things I can think of.

I am also very good at creating stories that mostly spins around Chrysalis, nightmare moon, or discord. With a human. And not just label them 'evil'

I'm also very good at helping you with stories. That makes an antagonist turn into a protagonist. Or atleast, like I don't know Queen chrysalis is the good guy instead of the ponies. And they are the bad ones. You get my point. ( This kind of stories is what the site lacks. So I recommend making something like this in the future. )

I am SPECIALLY good at making a Antagonist/protagonist mix OC. 

And if you need help coming up with a much more Complex Equestria. I can easily provide you with that.

I can also discuss things better with you if you add me on LINE.
if you don't know what that is google it. My ID is lunaisbestpony on LINE

Datjapanesekid, out

532565 that's pretty darn good!

http://purplelover7.deviantart.com/art/Present-for-my-friend-Zach-Blueness-376506305

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Oh yeah

The square root of 546 is 23.36664289109
SHE IS CORRECT!

Remember?