Daybreak fics anyone seen them?

i need an editor if anyone know a good editor pls help me out because im terrible at editing i don't need spellling i need grammer errors like run-ons and things like that.

i was thinking of starting a group for shippings like SombraxShy if anyone is interested or wants to help comment below

I have Started my First Fanfic come check it out
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/163892/the-life-of-zanti