And New Ages Come to Pass... · 6:06am Oct 19th, 2012
So, given enough time and feedback from Bright Eyes it's safe to safe that I buggered up the pacing a bit. People felt the ending was 'abrupt', and I wouldn't disagree with them. I believe that because I'd set the pacing of the story to be relatively slow over the majority of the story, having everything happen and resolve in Chapter 8, was what gave it the abruptness. Something to learn for the future!