Well then. You really have a way to keep me interested in what you write...

Bravo, my friend. Bravo.

I am glad that I followed you. It seems that it was one of the best decisions that I have made recently.

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Thanks good sir.

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I am glad you approve! I was a little uneasy about posting this because most of my followers were due to a clean romfic, but it seems to have gone over well!

I am pleasantly surprised. I wasn't expecting this kind of addition to the story. Nice job!

Good story my mane man!!!!!

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Had to be done! I expect I'll just have to write more scenes like this, I think. The world must know what happened between Chapter 15-16!

2440389

Thank ya boss!

2440985 we must know...

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This was just a side project to a much bigger RD/Soarin fic, Wouldn't wanna give all the good stuff away in one shot!

Then I realized this was written by the guy who was writing that family friendly SoarinDash fic I was following and I was like 'whoah'

Nice job. And for once, no gush. Nice restraint!

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Thanks! I have other talents if you'll slip inside my bedroom

And for once, no gush. Nice restraint!

Was hoping someone would comment on that!

I have not read a lot of clop, but what I did all seemed to have a torrent of juices surge from every orifice. This is the same in stories I've heard of and the like. Three times. I've been involved with the gush three times. In my life time. After seven years of semi-regular sex with plenty of foreplay with plenty of partners!

I know there's women who it happens to every time, but c'mon people... female jizzin' ain't that common!

2457921 Niagara ponies! And orgasms are more often whimpers than earth shattering moans of ecstasy. Creative license I guess

Would you mind if i expanded on this? Maybe a prolouge or sequel, it'd be your choice.

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I'm actually working on a sequel myself! I'll probably submit it before next week is out; it'll be an actual two-pony clopfic, but feel free do expand upon anything I write! There's no such thing as too much RD love.

2482787 How about some Soarin' love?

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That might be what's coming

2482787 You know his side of what happened? :3

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Naturally! My headcanon is all up in his business like a frisky teenager.

2482822 :3 you know i'll be watching you, now i'm off to find an excuse to write a clopfic :3

2482822 How about, dashie gets hurt....AGAIN, but this time a different pony comes to comfort her :3

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If you put something like that out, I'd be glad to read it! I gotta keep my mindset pure RD x Soarin for now, though! I got a big romfic to finish writing!

2482870 *cough* Soarin' is favorite pony *cough* i have some really weird coughs

i dont read clopfics i scroll through and read a few words.

I.... I am so glad I read this 0_o

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About time! Told ya about it like a month ago!

Is okay, we still bros.

Now that was sexy

loved it

I like this alot, it wasn't overdoing at all. good job.

I have no words...
Cuz I'm currently LAUGHING MY FACE OFF