Following Twilight Sparkle's explanation of the scientific method, Diamond Tiara says the sonic rainboom is a scientific phenomenon. Scootaloo insists it is magic. The Ponyville schoolhouse is the scene for an unprecedented intellectual dispute.
I don't know who I am, I can't recall what I am. All I know is that I'm not like others and I'm in a forest with strange sounds around me and two younger but softer versions of me are picking on and even hurting another one. What
It's been a week since Rainbow Dash saved Scootaloo after she jumped in to Ghastly Gorge and Rainbow Dash is keen for her to go back to school, as well as make good on a promise.
One day Cherilee is struck by a strange illness, but her substitute seems to be really strange! But when the CMC investigate they discover something that they shouldn't of known.
interesting concept, but it feels like someone cut the climax out of a good story. If this had more build up, less jumping between scenes, and proper grammar this would make a good story.
xD I know it's just a little story I wrote, between my big project. I needed a break you know? But thanks for the feedback and likes, I love you all (even the people who dislike :D) My main story project will be out soon though so, it would be nice if you checked it out. -Amanda out!
interesting concept, but it feels like someone cut the climax out of a good story. If this had more build up, less jumping between scenes, and proper grammar this would make a good story.
The story started out well, but like Zman said, it lost momentum, and the ending felt anticlimactic and abrupt.
xD I know it's just a little story I wrote, between my big project.
I needed a break you know?
But thanks for the feedback and likes, I love you all (even the people who dislike :D)
My main story project will be out soon though so, it would be nice if you checked it out.
-Amanda out!
Pay back is a bitch Diamond Tiara!