I hate going to school, especially a new school.
Today was no different, get up, have my breakfast, have a wash, grab my stuff and ride to school. I stood nervously waiting for the teacher to call me into the classroom to introduce me to the class. Nervous as I was, I was actually kind of excited for what new adventures awaited me inside the school house.
From inside the classroom I heard "Now, may I please introduce you to your new classmate, Scootaloo Flashchaser." Taking my cue, I entered the classroom and stood up the front as the teacher called my name. I stood there nervously looking around the classroom as the teacher, Ms. Cheerilee, I think her name was, asked if any of the students wanted to show me 'round the school. To my surprise, two fillies raised their hoofs, who I gathered to be named Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon. I gulped, getting a bad feeling about what was going to happen next.
At recess the two fillies lead me to a far corner of the school yard where they started to interrogate me over my wings and lack of cutie mark, as one of them was about to poke my bruise from my last fight a small white unicorn charged into them shouting "Leave her alone!" before I ran back to the schoolhouse. Hopefully she would be okay on her own, handling the two bullies.
Sitting at my desk, I almost began to cry when a squeaky voice said "Want to be my friend?" I looked up, saw the unicorn who tackled the bullies, and nodded.
review?
Okay, I want to read this, but I'm a bit wary due to the fact that your chapters are too short... I will read it because I will regret it if I don't... I just recommend that you make your chapters longer... Sorry!
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Sorry, I normally try to aim for about 1200 words a chapter.
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You get it?
2422515 Oh it's okay! I read it and it was really good! I just thought I'd say it because I normally do avoid stories so short which is bad of me... But yeah, I aim for around that too...
Anyway, its a good story and I cannot wait to see more! Really!
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I will try to write some more later today and not at midnight like these 2 chapters
2422696 Yeah xD I always write my chapters at like 3 am... its not the best idea! Anyway I look forward to seeing it! Take your time!
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Thanks :) now time for breakfast
2422727 time for bed for me! it's 4am! xD Enjoy breakfast
2422734 haha yea I will, I am a late riser it's 1pm here. Enjoy ya sleep
You don't have to post the chapter just then and there...
I can PM you a fixed up version of both chapters, and I found a cover picture, just ask the creator for permission to use it;
Okay, here it is!
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If you want to edit them that would be great as I am currently without a editor