Oh Photo, you nearly broke my heart. I wish her luck in changing. I also wish she would realize that she helps perpetuate what her audience wants. If you only show them as mindless brutes, of course all they desire is more of the same.
The only part of this fic that's been bothering me is how much of an aole Spike is. The others I can see as distortions of their own characters but Spike feels excessively so.
The only part of this fic that's been bothering me is how much of an ahole Spike is. The others I can see as distortions of their own characters but Spike feels excessively so.
Decided to read this for the Rarity/Diamond Dogs clop and it didn't disappoint in that regard, but rest of the story? I do have hard time trying to come up with anything positive beyond the interspecies smut.
Wow. I never thought I would be disappointed by someone enjoying interspecies but this is sort of an ensemble story. I mean, I'm all for D-Dog and pony lovin' but the rest is meant to be enjoyed as well. There's some more Rarity stuff in a later chapter, so just wait.
Because while they could do that they all still react to the unpleasant squeaking and such. More importantly the double condom look is unpleasant and destroys the possibility of money shots.
Oh Rarity can love. Porn star though she is she can really, truly love. She does. The thing is she does not love Spike. She loves her pack with a genuine, whole-hearted purity. That's why she loves her baby so much.
Lolz, so the condom law is about to change the porn industry and given Rare´s reaction/words it might even be for the better. Funny how this direction was never concidered with her and a dog, a romantic one. Feels are important too in sex, not just the act itself. It would be funny to see Twi´s weirded out face when she gets thanked by Rare cause thanks to her (ego) law she got to show the world the sensetive side of her dogs, something she could never do before cause ponies wanted to see raperaperape which does kinda speak for Twi´s reasoning if even Rare´s calls her fans bigot and such.
Also looks like Spike finally saw reality, now next chapter will show how he will handle it.
Had to tip my head for Twi to seriously work on all dem letters, most would have done it the easy way: Into the trashcan.
Stiil sad how much of a minor role Iron Will and Fluttershy got to play so far, even Rare (the new background pony :P) got more screen time than them. And i expected them to play a big part in this fic, espically Iron Will. But its nice to see Photo chara developement and how she and Hoity deals with the changes and tries to keep their studio up in black numbers though i´m sure they already lost lots of customers with the new movies. We shalll see if Twi will also get some developement or stays the egoistical "i´m always right"-bitch she is so far. I still think there´s more to it, again i had the feel some of the words hinted it like Twi feeling the whole world mocks her and such, but i doubt we´ll see that with Hoity and Photo as Twis main speak partners. Shy´s kindness and Iron´s assertiveness might be better for that but then again: Why would/should Twi speak with porn actors anyway? She doesn´t have much reason for that after all.
2573140 Really? I'm kind of skimming over the sex scenes. I won't deny reading them, but I'm actually more interested in this legal battle and the moral outrage and hypocrisy and such.
Christ. I'm more interested in seeing a redneck lose her shit over sexual impurity while her grandmother admits to having been unfaithful than I am in an orgy. What the fuck happened?
2576383 Oh, I know that. I'm just saying its a snowball's chance in hell that if you fall in love with a pornstar, it's not going to just be a one-sided crush.
Well, to sort of undermine your idea the only reason Rarity thinks it might be any good is that a consenting scene would allow the condom insertion to make sense. She'd rather do it raw and loving. Both sides of things, condoms and stupid prejudices, are hard on her.
2585005 This is American Gods all over again. Halfway through reading a scene where a djinn (male) seduces a cab driver (also male), before it sinks in that Neil Gaiman wrote a gay love scene between some cab driver and not-a-genie, and I'm reading it just as intensely as I read every other part of the book. It's a weird though to have, I tell you.
Oh Photo, you nearly broke my heart. I wish her luck in changing. I also wish she would realize that she helps perpetuate what her audience wants. If you only show them as mindless brutes, of course all they desire is more of the same.
The only part of this fic that's been bothering me is how much of an aole Spike is. The others I can see as distortions of their own characters but Spike feels excessively so.
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Still more compelling than Spike at Your Service.
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Decided to read this for the Rarity/Diamond Dogs clop and it didn't disappoint in that regard, but rest of the story? I do have hard time trying to come up with anything positive beyond the interspecies smut.
I warned you, Spike. I warned you. Did you listen? Nooooooo. Still waiting for Pinkamina Diane Pie, single female lawyer.
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Wow. I never thought I would be disappointed by someone enjoying interspecies but this is sort of an ensemble story. I mean, I'm all for D-Dog and pony lovin' but the rest is meant to be enjoyed as well. There's some more Rarity stuff in a later chapter, so just wait.
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She isn't quite "Ally McBeal" but you'll like her.
Well spike stupid as u may be at least u earn some respect dealing with twilight. yeah I'm talking about you twilight.
Feels from a clopfic? What is going on?! I don't know what's going on anymore! Is this real life?
If I could thumb up twice, I would. Ah, well.
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No matter what I am hard-wired to to create feels. It's at the base of who I am.
Spike, this is what happens when when you try to believe that a porn-star is going to have feelings for you.
also:
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*clap* *clap* *clap* is all i´ll say
is it okay to be scared by Pinkamena Attorney at Law?
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Be afraid. I kid. You'll see what she's like soon.
I don't get it, why don't they just record visuals and then add in dialogue and sound effects in post-production?
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Because while they could do that they all still react to the unpleasant squeaking and such. More importantly the double condom look is unpleasant and destroys the possibility of money shots.
2573117 You intense hatred of Merriweather Williams is well noted.
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Oh Rarity can love. Porn star though she is she can really, truly love. She does. The thing is she does not love Spike. She loves her pack with a genuine, whole-hearted purity. That's why she loves her baby so much.
2575210 I'm expecting Ace Attorney references oozing like grease from a burger.
Lolz, so the condom law is about to change the porn industry and given Rare´s reaction/words it might even be for the better. Funny how this direction was never concidered with her and a dog, a romantic one. Feels are important too in sex, not just the act itself. It would be funny to see Twi´s weirded out face when she gets thanked by Rare cause thanks to her (ego) law she got to show the world the sensetive side of her dogs, something she could never do before cause ponies wanted to see raperaperape which does kinda speak for Twi´s reasoning if even Rare´s calls her fans bigot and such.
Also looks like Spike finally saw reality, now next chapter will show how he will handle it.
Had to tip my head for Twi to seriously work on all dem letters, most would have done it the easy way: Into the trashcan.
Stiil sad how much of a minor role Iron Will and Fluttershy got to play so far, even Rare (the new background pony :P) got more screen time than them. And i expected them to play a big part in this fic, espically Iron Will.
But its nice to see Photo chara developement and how she and Hoity deals with the changes and tries to keep their studio up in black numbers though i´m sure they already lost lots of customers with the new movies.
We shalll see if Twi will also get some developement or stays the egoistical "i´m always right"-bitch she is so far. I still think there´s more to it, again i had the feel some of the words hinted it like Twi feeling the whole world mocks her and such, but i doubt we´ll see that with Hoity and Photo as Twis main speak partners. Shy´s kindness and Iron´s assertiveness might be better for that but then again: Why would/should Twi speak with porn actors anyway? She doesn´t have much reason for that after all.
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Really? I'm kind of skimming over the sex scenes. I won't deny reading them, but I'm actually more interested in this legal battle and the moral outrage and hypocrisy and such.
Christ. I'm more interested in seeing a redneck lose her shit over sexual impurity while her grandmother admits to having been unfaithful than I am in an orgy. What the fuck happened?
"Land Shark"
"Twilight, jump out of the window"
I CANT believe anyone didn't get this reference.
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Of course Derpy will accept your muffin-based tip, even if it wasn't offered.
only know movie featuring. known.
surprising passing briefly. surprise.
open enough. open up enough.
could It do. it.
away form the. from.
did they settled against. settle.
Pinkie shall blot out the sky with her legal forms.
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Well Merriwether has proven to be a very blah writer so far, with three crappy episodes, one meh, one decent, and one good.
2576318 Ah, good point.
2576383 Oh, I know that. I'm just saying its a snowball's chance in hell that if you fall in love with a pornstar, it's not going to just be a one-sided crush.
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THAT aspect of teh reference was from BronyStories. My original reference was to SNL. "Who's there?" "Candygram. Telegram. Land shark!"
Best kind of adult writing. Something that doesn't devolve into childish lacks of character building in favor of total fapfodder.
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Well, to sort of undermine your idea the only reason Rarity thinks it might be any good is that a consenting scene would allow the condom insertion to make sense. She'd rather do it raw and loving. Both sides of things, condoms and stupid prejudices, are hard on her.
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Who doesn´t prefer raw?^^
2576683 that my friend would be excelent writing. Excelent writing happened.
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This is American Gods all over again. Halfway through reading a scene where a djinn (male) seduces a cab driver (also male), before it sinks in that Neil Gaiman wrote a gay love scene between some cab driver and not-a-genie, and I'm reading it just as intensely as I read every other part of the book. It's a weird though to have, I tell you.
2585494 Wait. Neil Gaiman did what now?