Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash are stuck in the middle of the worst event possible in the Equestrian World; An apocalypse. With Fluttershy's kindness getting in the way, and Rainbow Dash's brash behavior causing the undead to enter rampages, how will they be able to find a cure? Especially when there is something wrong with Twilight.
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Wow this seems good, want more!
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More soon to come
Thanks!
Damn, color me impressed. I wish to know how this started in the first place and if this sickness could effect the Gods? Shit, are they in love or just friends? I could not really tell. I'll be waiting for more, I really like this, and I doubt even zombies could kill a Princess/Goddess
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I promise that'll be all cleared up near chapter five, or at least try. The purpose of this fiction is to be suspenseful, and hopefully drag more people interested by thoughts like;
"What happened to the princess" or "Will Fluttershy's nightmares become true", so on and so forth.
fairly certian twilight and whoever got to the lybrary are okay. i mean spike is a dragon, nigh impenitreble scales combined with the ability to incinerate someones head make for a handy protection.
Want more!
They really need more weapons then one gun. How do they shoot it when they have hooves anyway? Damn, I'm very disappointed that Derpy was the first to go, I would have thought she would had aided them....or betrayed them depending how how you wish for the story to go. What happened to Angel and Tank? They still alive? Shit, this is getting dark, Rainbow seems like she could use a drink and Fluttershy a cigarette.....damn, I can't wait to learn how all this happened. And now to see what of the other four and Spike.
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This was oddly good
Hmmmm....the CMC would mean all three, not just one. For some strange reason I don't trust Scootaloo, I have a bad feeling about her. But Pound Cake is only a baby or a foal, so not much he could do. I'm glad you explained how they shot the gun, it would have droven me crazy otherwise, still hoping to know who created them though.....hmmm.....Twilight left just as the zomponioes attacked? Something is very much hidden with those words, I'm guessing she took Spike with her, for some reason I have a dark feeling they may now be enemies instead of allies
I have no worry about the Gods, because you know....they are Gods. But I do wonder about the other four Mane Six and their pets (Spike's pet phenoix, Peewee included)
They very much need more weapons and ammo, and I for some reason find Scootaloo's story of Apple Bloom and Sweetie Belle trying to kill her false....I don't turst her. But if she is an enemy, at least make the battle hard before killing her...but slowly of that is your plan. I very much doubt Twilight would not have knives or some type of weapons in her house when the two were in there
likely twilight is currently occupying a bunker under the lybrary or was teleported away by celestia. now there four of them, this well get complicated.
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The possible fact that they took the weapons with them as they were "running away" is still there, and although I'm not sure if I should make it Twilicorn or Twilight, we can still know that Twilight isn't exactly at her "God" stage yet as a princess, considering that the coronation or however you spell it doesn't officially make that pony a God, right?
It may or may not. I'm not sure, but either way- Gods can still be infected, they don't have to die- they just have to be bitten. What if a zombie were to infect a guard- and that guard infected the rest. The Princesses would still be in extreme danger of become Zomb-ponies.
Sorry if none of this makes sense, but I'm not planning for everything I just typed to come true in my story, just thinking of the possibilities.
I don't like these kinds of stories(killing, zombies, etc.) BUT! before you come at me with a gun, hear me out. I LOVE THIS. I CAN'T TEAR MYSELF AWAY FROM IT.
Oh, and the only thing, make sure to edit your story!
that angel face isn't fooling me SCOOTALOO!
I want to find out more.. but i don't trust scoot
2410781 Personally I don't think it matters right now, if she was a Princess/Goddess then she would not have enough followers, with being new as the ponies would put their faith more in Celestia or Luna, so she would not fade and in my option the Gods can only be offically killed by another immortal.
Stil, it would be a twist if both Twilight and Spike were the villians or enemies in this story
Pound Cake is so freaking cute, you just want to hug the little guy, now what about his sister, Pumpkin Cake? I don't give a shit about their parents though but I don't trust any of the CMC for this story, something seems very wrong about them...maybe it was just an act that Scoots put towards Dash and Shy so they would fall into a trap, I would seriously be on my guard if I was them.
Awesome weapon, a knife, though it would help if more detail was given on it, I can see Rainbow with two long knifes, turned backwards gripped firmly in her wings as I could see Fluttershy with two guns in her own, that would be sick
Shit, the Gods can be effected? Then ecvery creature in Equestria is bucked....BIG time, a mortal can't kill a God/Goddess...this is not good
I love this new chapter, though it's hard to believe nopony was at the farm, not even Applejack (also Applejack is one word not two bro) and I would have thought Flutter's could have found more weapons then a single knife, with guns being created, not even ammo, this is going to get rough.
I can't wait for more, your making the chapters longer which I enjoy, really can't wait for more, weather they meet friend or foe....this is going to be amazing
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Thats amazing how you say you aren't a fan of these books yet you are reading mine, like I said before; I didn't expect one of my stories to become so popular. I'm glad you're reading and hope you stay reading. It'll be a pleasure to see your comments.
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I'm certainly hoping these chapters stay longer, my mind can't focus on one thing at a time for this and-
I'm thinking more about Pumpkin Cake for the story, although I feel as if a colt/stallion is seriously needed in this story.
And for the Farm bit, I was hoping I could fit an Apple in there, but I just didn't know who to add. As for apple speaking... Applejack is one word? Never knew it. Thank's for tellin' me. Certainly will fix that problem
Plus; I will try to add more knife detail in the next chapter like I did with the gun shooting, I am taking your comments into consideration because you seem to be giving me parts of information that I forget so easily.
I promise the chapters will be getting longer and once the book is complete, I will edit my mistakes (large and small).
You should make them go to a theme park, where Fluupttershy, pound cake and Scoots get stuck on a ride with a horde of zombies trying to climb p at them! And Rainbiw Dash is being a badass, slaughtering the zombies whilst inside a confectionary stand!
(10 points if you know what I'm on about ! )
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Lol. I see what you did thar
2411153 well wheres it from?
2410781 OBJECTION! between the 3 of them they hold equestrias most powerful magic between them, if there attacked they could simpy vaporize there attacker before they could bite them, also no viral infection can survive intense heat which an alicorn can, celestia could simple bath them in fire and they would be safe. there are bijillions of ways they could defend themselves
anyway great story you captured the atmosphere of a real zombie apocalypse, still say this wouldn't effect spike but looking forward to the rest of your story.
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Your doing great as youare mty friend, I just can't wait to see new friends or foes that are not zomponies
Pumpkin would be a great part of the team, even though she is a baby
Hmmm.....how about Raindrops? Or Rose Luck? or Sparkler? Or Snowflake? Thunderlane, Fancy Pants hell even Discord (though I doubt he would help being the God of Chaos and Disharmony) take your pick LOL, I got more.
Granny Smith maybe alive but slowly dying would have helped if anything, she could have gave Fluttershy some info on the location of her family or weapons or even food, you know? I would assume Big Macintosh would be protecing a large group of ponies somewhere and maybe forgot about his grandmother and AJ would have been with her family in Applelossa or even with the other three of the Main Six and of course I don't trust Apple Bloom so I doubt she would really aid Fluttershy in anyway really.
Your welcome, it's a common mistake but one that needs to be corrected.
That's awesome, really can't wait to hear more about it and that very much means a lot to me, I can't wait to see what you will come up with on future chapters, I'll try to help you as best as I can.
Seriously badass
maybe even depending on how the book is complete and if people like it you might even be able to make a second one in someone else's point of view
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Psh, Zombie Land of Course! One of my favorite movies!
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Of course, new characters are being added, and I'm trying to make it more background ponies- though. Ponies who don't have a voice but need one. They're always my favorite types.
I was thinking of doing that for Big Mac, but I felt like I have introduced so many characters already- however I did make that shuffling in the barn for a reason. I may take that idea for a chance of Big Mac, Braeburn, A.J., Apple Bloom, Granny Smith and a bunch of other Apples hiding in a bunker behind the walls. I've always loved how bunkers work in history, and it seemed like an appealing idea. Until I noticed that I don't want Fluttershy staying in the barn for half an hour because of the Zombies that might have gone after Rainbow Dash at the same time
That would have sucked if Fluttershy came back to see her only alliances dead and eaten.
Second books aren't always a good idea, but thinking about it in the past; my original story idea was writing it in a zombie's view instead. For instance, the second book would explain more of how the infection started if Derpy were the main character in the book. She was one of the first to go, so she had to be extremely close to seeing what happened before Fluttershy and Rainbow got there to her aid. I could go into more detail of how Carrot Top/Golden Harvest nommed on her precious little derpy face, or get into more detail of the zombie's desire of flesh and love and stuff. But, until I finish this one, I don't exactly see a sequel coming in the future. Which may be good, and may be bad.
Depending on how the community sees it.
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They may be powerful beings, but think about how much worrying they go through at this time. It is considered that they may be Gods, but they still have stress which can effect on how their magic is working. In deep times of stress, we notice that Twilight gets angst, and her magic isn't all that powerful, where as Celestias magic is limited, too. Why wouldn't Celestia go get that crystal heart instead of sending the single unicorn, did it really take the elements of harmony, and in the past I've questioned Celestias abilities, for sending six younger ponies with less wisdom to do her work for her.
P.S. Thank you, I've watched very few zombie movies, believe it or not, and find that some still don't get that complete zombie "Atmosphere". Some are just dark all the time, but just because the race that rules the world are getting killed off, it doesn't mean that the sun still doesn't go up and the moon doesn't rotate around. It's impressive, though, the ones who still notice that earth doesn't stop rotating as soon as hearts stop beating.
Wow, the new pony seems like a wimp but not much of a tratior like Scootaloo, it took them forever to get to that gun stone. I wonder if she was raped....hmmm....this chapter really makes one think. Very enjoyable
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One does not just add a Zombieland twist into the lives of ponies.
My work here I'd done...
I shall leave this educational video Fir your entertainment
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Pizelle got raped, then she killed her rapist!
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I'm Glad you both think that for Pizzelle, I was unsure of adding that because it is a sensitive topic to some people and I would hate to tear apart some viewers (or readers in this case) just because of a real life topic. I do have a sick and twisted mind, but I would hate to make others uncomfortable with it.
And, Having her in the gun shop was weird. What was a pony like her doing in a gun shop and why wasn't she shooting up a storm. Sometimes I don't plot these out before I write them, and once I read it over, I was thinking that specifically.
Just in case you hadn't noticed, I've been on vacation and don't have my original laptop I wrote this on, so a new chapter might not come out until Monday, unless I get bored and start writing again.
2445694 if she got raped she would have been in shock or she would be trying to sort out her emotions, so even though she's in a gun shop, I doubt that shed go on a Zompony killing rampage!!
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2445694 I agree with bored and writing
As for your OC, as much as someone would annoy the buck out of me she is a good part of the team, for now. Shit, have you read my stories, my mindsert is FAR more darker then your own, I do'n t think I have a line to cross. But it's to each their own, some people would be offended but I'm not, really can't wait for the next chapter
Bad clopping, bad!
so some apples survived? or buffalo? seriously how did the buffalo do with this?
You kidding? I love clopfics, I write my own
But damn, this girl is crazy.....she's still weak and annoying as shit but at least it's the kind that won't kill you for fun, still don't tryust Scootaloo, evne more so with Apple Bloom, also try to remember it's Applejack, one word. Other then that, poir Thunderlane, thart guy is amazing, I wonder what happened to Rumble?
Gods, I'm so excited to see this story, I love it
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I sorry u_u
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I was thinking that the buffalo would have died for not having weapons other than spears and not having strong ties with the ponies. I want to star a few dead Buffalo in the next chapter, but it'll have to be a little longer- I've been having with that lately.
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Rumble is his little brother, right? I remember the name from Hurricane Fluttershy but I never fanned of the idea of some random character put in to say; "Where is you're lazy brother". I would add him, but there is also that survivalist group that Pizzelle remembered. That'll be used a lot near the ending, when they get to [SPOILER ALERT] Canterlot.
I'm glad that I'm not the only one, but I feel a little worried that most readers wouldn't enjoy the Clop part. I feel bad for putting it in, but then again it needed it. In most movies I've seen with apocalyptic happenings, they always think that making babies is good.
I'm confused... What exactly is happening?
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A lot in one scene... So I'll sum it up in general.... *Gasp*
So The ponies are down at Appaloosa finally and they are gathering survivors to help them on their journey to find Twilight Sparkle/Princess.
Next scene has to do with Scootaloo knowing nothing but death and hate, so she takes it out on her friend and ends up killing her with satisfaction, which is stupid of myself because I love Apple Bloom.
Then the last scene is everyone hanging out and having a good old relaxing time with some laughter and stuff. Sounds great, I know. Although this is everywhere, I tried my best to switch few parts, and i hope it isn't too confusing because we'll be following Scootaloo a bit, too.
2476544 can you make it so it's Unicorn Twilight?
Sometime in the near future chapters, you need to have Dash have to kill Scoots, not zombie Scoots, regular Pony Scootaloo, and have like, have to kill her because she was gonna hurt Applebloom or something.
Shit, that's bucked up what Scoots did, she did not have to kill her, she could have got her to work again their friends and family, damn...I'm honestly sad she is dead, seriously but I'm glad Scoots is fully evil, hoping Sweetie Belle joins her as well, buck.....now I got to see what happens next,
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Scootaloo is already separated from the group, and had already killed off poor Apple Bloom. Rainbow Dash cannot stop her from killing Apple Bloom because the task was already done
Anywho, Scootaloo will probably end up being killed by one of the survivors towards chapter ten, I would think? If they catch up to Scoots/Scoots catches up to them. But I like the idea.
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I wouldn't exactly call it "Mature" though, I will possibly mark it with the "Sex" tag and leave it as that, because I promised myself that I am no longer adding anymore clop into the story. I have plotted a little bit of it out for future chapters, and I promise no more.
Although it hadn't crossed my mind at first, it is a good suggestion and I will fix this problem. Thanks for the intel
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Yes you do c:
Lol and, Agreed. I can't stand myself now for killing off Apple Bloom. She's my favorite out of all fillies and ponies in general. She just makes me think so much of a little kid, and in particular, my little cousin. Next Chapter soon!
is sweetie belle ok?
DAFUK SCOOTS?!?
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I KNOW RITE.
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Sweetie Belle is coming up soon, I swear on it
Actually, it IS "Pound Cake and me"
When dealing with multiple nouns, you need to think of the sentence with only one of the nouns at a time.
"I can tell you what happened to Pound Cake" is grammatically correct.
"I can tell you what happened to me" is grammatically correct.
Since "I can tell you what happened to I" isn't grammatically correct, therefore the correct usage in this case is "Pound Cake and me"
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Thanks for the correction. I will add it/fix it when I finish and go to my finishing corrections.
Thank you, again.
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Very nice edition to P.D.P!
HOLY BUCK!!! I was SO EXCITED to see this updated, damn, a lot of ponies in this one, I have no idea who Candy Apple is though, anyway....hmmm...remember that it's Roseluck and for some reason I can see her become a traitor maybe later on if she's added more, no clue why, maybe because she is awesome as buck. The fact that Pinkie is chained up and evil is seriously indulging, I love it, it's not original but she would be the first to fall into darkness. Shit, I thought Apple Bloom was killed, if she lives this is not going to be goof and I very much doubt she would work with Scoots and be an enemy to the new Mane Six, but I can dream.
Wow, dark words from Fluttershy but at least she is not deluding herself into thinking that all ponies can live through this shit, don't care much for Mr. and Mrs. Cake so...eh
Talk about descending into madness though, this battle is going to be GOOD!!! I'm glad Applejack does not care for Rarity anymore, far as I seen, I hate that white furred bitch and hope she dies slowly and painfully, can't wait to see Sweetie Belle, this is getting intense and still no sign of the Gods, Twilight or Spike eh? Hoping the last two are enemies to Rainbow's little band that would be such a dark and amazing twist
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I can't describe how excited I am, either! The next chapter, though, is going to be mostly Pinkie seeming how she would have a lot to say being through all of this, chained up for a few months. The fight, I promise, will be at the ending and I will try to make it as gory as I can get. I've been watching episodes of "The Walking Dead", so this shouldn't be too difficult for me. P.S. News about Luna will be heard when they go back to Ponyville for a bit of a search on Time Turner or Pinkie Pie.
(Candy Apples is a background character, She's just one of Applejack's Cousins.
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Sorry to sound stupid, but... What's P.D.P...
2581109 Pinkamena Diane Pie xD