Bad things have happened to Equestria. Starvation has killed many ponies and if starvation didn't kill them... suicide would. It's up to star and Grim to find out about this mysterious Midnight and help save all of Equestria. Time is short and so is life... especially if you don't know how to survive a horrid wasteland.
I didn't know you were into professional winter sports...
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I'll get my sled...
Red = Ya screwed it.
Yup. Get an editor. Nao.
EDIT : I only pointed out minor things, I'll save the big stuff for the pros. I'm like, semi-pro at this moment in time. Reachin' the ranks, baby. :P
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