Finally old enough to pursue her dream, Rainbow Dash parts with her friends and joins pre-season training with the Wonderbolts. Old enemies and new friends come together as she trains, but being a Wonderbolt is about more than just flying faster than the rest. Will Rainbow Dash prove capable of overcoming the obstacles arrayed before her, or will she drop out and become another failed hopeful? There's only one way to find out! Contains some language not appropriate for younger bronies.
Originally posted to EqD on Friday, December 2, 2011. Hiatus over, chapter 2 almost ready!
EDIT: All instances of "Ditzy" replaced with "Derpy." Her character is more-or-less unchanged from the original upload, though.
Chapters (3)
Ditzy is thinking-outside-the-box-est pony.
"Because I am hard, you will not like me. But the more you hate me, the more you will learn. I am hard but I am fair."
Derpy 2n in command.... and then cloudsdale was on fire....
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Great to see an update. Looking forward to next chapter.
"I just don't know what went wrong."
Oh Derpy, we love you.
Another great chapter. One thing I like about this fanifc is the use of MLP comedy and lightness mixed with some real world seriousness and even occasional swearing.
This deserves more views :D
Tracked and liked.
This is getting better and better
I like this story so far, good job bud. I hope fore more after chapter 3 very soon.
“You think it's funny, rat?” Dash bit her tongue, but it was useless. “You want a good laugh? You think I'm here for your entertainment?” Dash shoved a hoof in her mouth, stifling the laughter for good, and returned to a straight face.
Response (spoken firmly and quickly, so as not to be interrupted):
"I was not laughing at you, nor are you here for my entertainment, merely that your words were inherently amusing. You may argue this if you so desire, but then humor itself is inherently subjective. The fact that I found amusement in your wording does not lessen your authority over those assembled here, or it wouldn't have if you had not reacted like you'd been slapped with a fish."
Do you get so many pushups that your arms off? FUCK YES. Does the commanding officer feel extremely silly and maybe refrain from treating everything like a personal insult in the future? YOU'D BETTER FUCKING BELIEVE IT.
FINISH THIS!