We know that Luna is grateful to Fluttershy for teaching her. But does this go past that?
SCREW THIS CRAP!
I THINK EVERYONE CAN AGREE THAT THIS STORY IS CRAP. HOWEVER IT DID GET ME PAST MY WRITERS BLOCK, SO I SHALL BEGIN WORKING ON ALICORNS OF HARMONY AGAIN IMMEDIATELY.
I COULDN'T FINISH THIS STORY BECAUSE I DIDN'T LIKE IT, THAT SIMPLE.
So ya, thanks for udnerstanding, for those that were enjoying the story, sorry, I might come back and do it again later.
SPOILER ALERT: HOW THIS STORY WAS SUPPOSED TO END.
Luna asks Fluttershy to get married, they get married, they love each other, the end...
see not much content eh?
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Aww I wanted a new Lunashy.
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I might make a better one later just for you, but it will be much much much better written.
Eh, I think the story could be salvaged, but only if you re-did it entirely. So it's probably for the best that you do something else for awhile, you know? I'll be waiting for you to pick it back up!
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Ya, that's what I'm planning, same basic concept but start over.
Also you'll be happy to know that alicorns of harmony is coming along swimmingly and I plan on making the remainder of the chapters longer, and mroe comprehensive.
My reaction to the first chapter:
My reaction to the next part: