When a dragon moves into the Everfree Forest, how will the ponies react? Is this dragon out to destroy the village, or Equestria?
Please note: This story takes place before season 3, as I was heavily disappointed with it and would like this to be like the show used to be; no reformed Discord, no Princess Sparkle, none of that.
This story is incomplete & old. I am not finishing it, but I hope you enjoy the read anyway.
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I did not. Description, you lied to me.
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As i said in the author's notes, I tend to be a blunt writer and not a very good one at that. Your displeasure is unsurprising, to say the least. Sorry for wasting your time.
2358827 Oh, it wasn't a waste of time. Though, there is a note I'd like to make.
The issue with this is the personal element.
is not something that you should put it. It'll make the reader think that you got all upset and decided to create your own little idea of a "correct" season. Kind of like people who write self-insert human in Equestria fics. An alternative might be something like this:
It gets the message out that this is an AU, and it doesn't need to provide the reasons.
I didn't check that carefully, but did you only not like Discord's reformation and Twilight Sparkle's evolution, or was there more you cut out?
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I put that to mean that this takes place right after the Royal Wedding. Season 3 just didn't have the same feel for me as the 2 previous seasons did, so I tried to cling onto the original storyline, more or less.
So basically, this story was supposed to have all events of the third season cut out.
2363096 Right. so just say it takes place after the wedding, before any of the events of season 3.