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White Deer


Really, I have to write a biography of myself as soon as I join here?!

Comments ( 15 )
Comment posted by G-man64 deleted Jan 2nd, 2015

Great story, I enjoyed it very much. I loved when Graphite was starting to develop feelings for Sunny and the two became a couple and the ending of Chapter 30 and the also the Epilouge were very heart-warming.

Is Hot-Sauce based off of the RED soldier from TF2?

This chapter is a copy of the last one. :/

5472271 Whoopise, my apologies. This is my first time uploading here so some things do go wrong here and there. Thank you for pointing it out though. Everything should be fixed now. :twilightblush:

To answer your previous question - No, Hot Sauce is not based off the soldier from TF2.

5466731 Thank you for the kind words. I'm glad you liked it. On a bit of a side note, there are tiny spoilers in your comment. Could you edit it if possible?

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Yeah I know what you mean, and the reason I thought that was because of her colour and the pan over her eyes. :P

5475765 Done. Sorry about that it kinda slipped my mind.

Loved the story! A couple grammatical errors here and there, but nothing major. The epilogue wrapped it all up quite nicely, though I was hoping to see how the other ponies he had affected fared in the end.

Fuck me. Great story, shame it endend there.

Your book has been advertised on the new facebook group page: https://www.facebook.com/groups/foebooks/ :)

You misspelled off shaking of the shards of glass

The major description of the tin can while being shot

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