I so like this story of yours! It's simply superb! You definetely need to find a desire and time to continue it - this is maybe the best story based on colorism through this entire fandom
Thank you. While I definitely have room to evolve in the writing style department, I'm somewhat pride myself upon choosing new ideas for stories, or put a twist in existing ones. Rest assured, I want to continue this story, but 40-50 C of hotness practically killed me during summer. Regardless, I have most of the next chapter ready, and plan to update more frequently. (Although I suppose the best authors on the site tend to write a chapte for months, so I've got that part right.)
As foreshadowing, here's the next chapter's title: Nightmares of Equestria
3332676 !!! And btw I also think that this beautiful story really lack faves and upvotes. Let me help it with this serious problem, even if it's not very much I can do FOREVER! AND EVER! In my favlist.
"rouge griffon group"?
There are red griffons now?
Rogue is the word you're looking for.
"I remembered how much I love this tow"
"I remembered how much I love this town"
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I deliberately put rouge in, to see if someone notices.
I liked the chapter but wished you had kept it so i focused more on the main group i like then all the other small groups.
I so like this story of yours! It's simply superb! You definetely need to find a desire and time to continue it - this is maybe the best story based on colorism through this entire fandom
BTW:RBxAJ = awesome
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Thank you. While I definitely have room to evolve in the writing style department, I'm somewhat pride myself upon choosing new ideas for stories, or put a twist in existing ones. Rest assured, I want to continue this story, but 40-50 C of hotness practically killed me during summer. Regardless, I have most of the next chapter ready, and plan to update more frequently. (Although I suppose the best authors on the site tend to write a chapte for months, so I've got that part right.)
As foreshadowing, here's the next chapter's title:
Nightmares of Equestria
3332676
!!!
And btw I also think that this beautiful story really lack faves and upvotes. Let me help it with this serious problem, even if it's not very much I can do
FOREVER! AND EVER! In my favlist.