hey is't twilight's mane dark blue meaning she might have to go on the run soon(personally I can't wait for that conversation between trixie and twilight.)
Twilight: soooo... um my brother Trixie: uh yeah he's a nice colt Twilight: yeah he is. um just on a off chance you wouldn't happen to know somepony Trixie: know why Twilight: uh no reason no reason at all
Change? Didn't notice. *Checks the old chapters* Yep. I personally like the breaks.
My favourite scene was when Big Mac threw the bottles against the wall. That made feel proud of the quiet stallion.
God, now I ship Big Mac and Pinkie. YOU ARE RUINING MY MIIIIIIIIIIIIIND!
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MacXhaybale and PinkieXclone OTP!
2444632 Rainbow x Soar in and Trixiex Shining Armor new OTP!
hey is't twilight's mane dark blue meaning she might have to go on the run soon(personally I can't wait for that conversation between trixie and twilight.)
Think it will go something like this:
Twilight: soooo... um my brother
Trixie: uh yeah he's a nice colt
Twilight: yeah he is. um just on a off chance you wouldn't happen to know somepony
Trixie: know why
Twilight: uh no reason no reason at all
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He's just a psycho who had a crush on Cloudchaser. Whole stuff with the nationwide persecution came handy for him. Or hoofy. Choose one.
Nice Chapter! Just a little bit confusing. Aaaand: WAY to few Rainbow Dash!
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What the .. Okay, makes sense *approvesmilie*. can't wait for the next chapter!
(Please dont feel offensed or something like that by my comments; My english isnt very god, so i dont really know if it can be read as mean or not =S