• Published 31st Mar 2013
  • 1,528 Views, 11 Comments

Daring Do and the Endless Wastes - slash mlp

Comments ( 5 )

10/10 would come inside again

So fucking random. Just the way mind works. So love the story.

This story lacked the subtle nuance of its predecessor. While the attempt at the multilayered narrative that explore the over reliance of modern academia on the 3 act structure made for a fascinating, post modernist statement on the sate of current modes of thought, the piece's ambition over reached its abilities. I tip my fedora to your effort, good anons, but I am afraid I must rate the whole product quite poorly. :moustache:

2/10 Would not fap too aging.

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