Twilight Sparkle is being corrupted in mind and spirit by the Shadow, a dark magical force from ancient times. Now Princess Celestia is in a race against time to find the key to saving her student and her friends from the seduction of the Shadow.
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Everypony wave to the passing downvoter!
*waves to the downvoter* Sorry that you didn't like this awesome story!
Wow... beautiful images were made with this chapter. I'm glad that Twilight won the verbal battle against Discord and collected Fluttershy. Fluttershy's transformation was a huge surprise really. The words make me think of that sort of joke legend, when a butterfly flaps it's wings or something, it causes a tornado or the other side of the world. I probably butchered the legend, but alas.
I sadly don't have much more to say. I don't know if you noticed my late comment on the last chapter. The way things are moving just make me more and more suspicious that I am correct. I look forward to more. By the way, are we near the third book or will there be a bit more?
Dammit, Fluttershy. At least Rarity put up a fight.
Edit: Removed gif because I overreacted.
Idk about the rest of the readers here, but this paragraph really resonates with me.
Great chapter. Totally has that, fatalistic feel to it.
GAWD, I almost wish I had waited to start reading all this untill you had finished it. Almost.
Keep up the awsome work, and let us know if we can help. Even if it's just something minor to help get your mind of of things for a while.
2595922 Oh, those downvoters are the folks who can't see there are so many shades of grey in the world and only try to live in black and white. They end up being hopeless from both sides in the end.
2596085 It's alright. I'm afraid I've had Shy lined up as the "Example" to be made for a while now. This whole scene concept simply wouldn't have worked with anypony else, I'm afraid. Ultimately, while I don't think of her as a pushover character, she got bullrushed by a lot of stuff all at the same time. Poor shy.
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My heart goes out to Cadance and Shining Armor. It looks like they really are going to have to hold down the fort, if this is a sign of what to come. As for the gif, dark side has yet to do anything that really earns my ire.
2596851 The only criticism I don't like is criticism that isn't constructive, and at the end of the day - I don't care what your excuse is. If you think something is bad enough to toss a thumbs down on it, you can take a minute or two out of your day to elucidate why.
Holy smokes! This was a great chapter!
I enjoy how even Umbra believes that Discord will simply step out of the way and roll over for them. I eagerly await the antics Discord gets up to in order to interfere without really interfering.
Cadence and Shining Armor need to declare martial law in Ponyville and bring several battalions of the guard to set up a perimeter into Everfree. If not, then Ponyville gets taken in a surprise attack and their enemies can spread out easily from there.
Fluttershy having a physical transformation is interesting, it will also be interesting to see what personality changes she has. I've said it before, but Fluttershy without restraint will end up being rather dangerous. I wonder if the others will undergo physical transformation as well.
Can't wait for more, and don't pay attention to the down voters they're not worth the time.
Don't pay attention to the down-voters, especially those that didn't explain. They probably either read your summary and got all butt-hurt over it or they just have that feeling of anonymous freedom.
*coughs* Anyhow, this is another good chapter, and we finally get the whole fall of Fluttershy (And in a way, Discord said, make that stone that represents Fluttershy fall, yes? But it didn't fall, it's absorbed to the ground... so in a way, Umbra avoids what term Discord had laid, did that makes sense? )
And that Fate was cruel and Order, unkind makes me think of a song. |D
2598605 It was supposed to make you think of a certain song. Dohohohohoho.
Also - Discord has got to be my second favorite character arc in the rest of this story - when you see what he's going to do over what happened to Fluttershy..... Hooooo, I cant wait to write it.
2598615 By chance, is this the song?
I can't wait to see it then!
2598623 Actually it's supposed to be the original by Ponyphonic, but yes that song essentially.
2598635 It is the combined form of both, by the Ponyphonic, and the reply. It's beautiful to be heard.
Am I the only reader here who wishes for Celestia to make it on time?
... anyone?
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Yes you are.
2608121 i was more hoping for discord to show up and take flutter-shy away. The agreement was they would not interfere with each other, and discord's plan was to protect Fluttershy, umbra corrupting her would be interference on his part and therefore breaking his side of the agreement.
2596027 the butterfly flapping its wings and causing a hurricane is not a legend, it just an over simplified (really oversimplified because in reality a butterfly was born that never should have been and flaped it's wings then everything in the distance it's light travels would change and the closer something is the faster the change would happen, but as all probabilities are it could be a big a small difference) analogy of the chaos theory.
Fluttershy should of at least gone down like a boss this part was a real let down -sigh-
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This may be a bit late, but like this?
Lullaby for a Princess by ponyphonic One of my favourite songs ever
2608121 Nope you are not. I also hoped that Discord...well did something more. He just vanished. Now all elements are corrupted and it doesn´t look too well for the light forces.
3350572 yes I picked that up 2
3322197 that would of ben kick ass
Mother? Addams family you've officially been replaced as the weirdest yet most beloved family of all time.
I think Discord should have hidden Flutters in a pocket dimension or Cleveland.
Too true! More folks should have this mentality. The world would be a better place.
How can I have sent you away?.
I see what you did, there.
Sadly? Your view on this makes me think that ultimately, the Shadow will lose... Sad, but hopefully it will still be interesting along the way, as it has been.