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Jank Rubz


I like ponies. I heard that there was this show called MLP: FiM, and I thought "Who watches this show besides me?" Cupcakes.

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Two months after the initial changeling invasion of Canterlot, Celestia invites Chrysalis back to the kingdom to patch things up and negotiate an act of peace between the changelings and ponies. But, even with increased security measures and more guards to wave a hoof at, it's still not enough to absolve the two of their bitter pasts.

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Pretty straightforward. Could have used some padding here and there, some more awkward silence before they open up to each other, but all in all a nice story.

Celestia you have one of strangest methods ever

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I didn't want to drag it on too much, or else I'd lose interest. :P

2328692 You know, if you, as the writer, allready have a hard time staying interested, that bolds pretty bad for the readers. xD

Is Celestia an idiot? Cryssy didn't seem to learn anything. Move the hive to Canterlot actually soundly like a good idea, but only if Equestria got to annex it.

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My one-offs generally go through a night of writing. Well, the conclusion is written in one night; the exposition and stuff is written over the course of several days prior. I was finished with this around 3:45 AM, so I was a bit frazzled from the coffee and fatigue to really go over something like this. It's a one-off I kind of wrote for myself. I've wanted to write a "Celestia and Chrysalis having a tea party" story for a while, and later I'll go over this to fix any errors or patch things up.

Hopefully that clarifies things.

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Small steps and the seed of friendship implanted into her mind are enough for slow progression. :twilightsmile:

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Like a brain eating parasite?

... Damn it, now i'm imagining CesxChrys
And you know what? I don't mind at all :ajsmug:

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In the pods? Except together?

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Probably somewhere more comfortable, like a bed... Or the shower... :trixieshiftright:

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Well... Now I'm wondering if there's a Celestia x Chrysalis fic out there.

(I know the answer is "yes")

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Sorry for an out-of-place reply, but... What does this Gold Member thing mean? I've been looking everywhere to no avail :raritydespair:

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Must be an April Fool's joke for select accounts. I'm barely active enough to even be eligible for gold membership. Also, I think the mods picked this one up from 4chan. :raritywink:

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Oh... Ah, well, damn, they got me. :pinkiecrazy:
Thanks, dude :pinkiesmile:

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No problem. Also, the posts by the site admins seem pretty convincing.

Hahah, that was nice. And I think at this point neither dude really knows why they hated each other.

Cya
Raziel-chan

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