Giant snakes made of explosions? You couldn't have cobbled together a group of ANYTHING more suited to drawing dear Dashie's attention. Also, she may not be the ultimate end-all that is Fluttershy, but something tells me those four stallions are in for a somewhat wilder ride than they were expecting...
I agree with NaturalGlitch, But I could give two maybe three shits less. This is freaking hilarious and I cant wait to read more. just, Don't let it hit the mature rating? Clopfics are a dime a dozen.
This story is very entertaining and unfortunately very realistically written in character making it that much more awkward (for me). Bad imagination. BAD!
I...don't know what to say. My mind is screaming NONONONONONONONO, but I'm laughing my ass off. I am so confused right now. And will continue to be. Following.
I don't know. I can't either. The characters are SCARILY in character, and it's not TOO explicit... But it's still sodding hilarious. Talk about your unforeseen circumstances.
Too funny, yet at the same time ew. That is all.
DUN DUN DUNNN
At your personal request.
HILARIOUS!
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Giant snakes made of explosions? You couldn't have cobbled together a group of ANYTHING more suited to drawing dear Dashie's attention. Also, she may not be the ultimate end-all that is Fluttershy, but something tells me those four stallions are in for a somewhat wilder ride than they were expecting...
186270 Buffalo buffalo Buffalo buffalo buffalo, buffalo Buffalo buffalo.
No. Sorry, don't like the idea of heat in FIM. They're sentient. It wouldn't work like this at all.
I agree with NaturalGlitch, But I could give two maybe three shits less. This is freaking hilarious and I cant wait to read more. just, Don't let it hit the mature rating? Clopfics are a dime a dozen.
Da.... Da fuq?
WHAT HAVE YOU DONE?!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!?!
To Pony Hell, where Fluttershy lives with you!
-The Librarian
Zecora getting her flask? But she "can't get ye flask!" It's the first rule of anything. "You can't get ye flask!"
But in all honesty, I am seriously enjoying this story. Probably more than I should. Then again, what can I expect from the author of Progress?
This is one of the most witty things I've ever read. Take my five stars, please - I do not need them anymore.
Painfully funny. Thanks for reminding me of how un-witty I am.
This is hilarious, especially Fluttershy in heat. Would love to see more of this as soon as possible.
Uh oh...
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This story is very entertaining and unfortunately very realistically written in character making it that much more awkward (for me). Bad imagination. BAD!
Tracking in shame
"seven if you counted the tail"
i thought you were going somewhere else with that...
Please stop making it easy to read Fluttershy's lines in GLaDOS's "deeper, seductive" voice.
Well, there goes my brain. If you'll excuse me, I gotta knock myself out before my imagination becomes TOO creative...
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You unbolt ye flask and hold it aloft.
Well, uh...I suppose that...What I'm trying to say is...WAT
Hoping Spike gets some..."love" (I don't know why, but I've got a bad feeling about Applebloom)
I know this is wrong on multiple levels, but i can't stop reading, please make more
BANZAI!!!
When this started I wasn't quite sure where this was going to go but it is actually funny without been too "blue."
Good effort. I wondering how this will end but the idea of Luna being worse than Flutters is scary to imagine.
The mind does boggle at times with the bizarre mental images but great read.
187017 I would like to second this motion.
If I don't see Molestia, I will be severely disappointed. .
What is...
I can't even...
Why is there...
My brain is completely...
Can't finish sentences...
Rrraaaaaauuuuugggghhhh!
No...must stop...too werid...*Tracks*NOOOO!!! Who am I kidding, this is hilarious. If only my imagination would behave.
187343 Don't worry mate, just embrace the madness!
DUN DUN DUNNN DUN DUN DUNNN DUN DUN DUNNN DUN DUN DUNNN!
Yes, one problem solved, but now another rises (pun totally intended!)
-Glassed
Oh my stars and garters, this is hilarious! I'm eagerly awaiting more, more, more ... um, if that's okay with you I mean ...
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Also, to Flutterrapist;
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You're going to "love" her.
An odd mixture of grotesque and funny.
All i can say is that I'm tracking dis.
I'm going to track this, but as soon as it's over I am TORCHING THIS COMPUTER.
This is so wrong. I love it.
Oh holy mother of god why.
Oh, wait, fanfiction, right.
Well, it's better than what I thought it would be, I'll admit that.
Holy crap, when I saw this, I just had to read it! Can't right now, so I'll just track it. But I'm sure it's gonna be great!
Read the description and my jaw fell off. I can't seem to get it back on.
What have I stumbled upon and why do I like it
I dont want to track this... BUT I HAAAVE TOOOO
ITS TOO GOOOOOOOD
I...don't know what to say. My mind is screaming NONONONONONONONO, but I'm laughing my ass off. I am so confused right now. And will continue to be. Following.
Not ashamed to admit it, this is goddamn hysterical. And frighteningly in character.
Watching closely, because this was one of the funniest things I've read on the site.
Well, besides "A Perfectly Normal Day in Ponyville," but still. My god.
this is a tale worth finishing, if i ever saw one. not too much clop, and just the right amount of chaos to make it hilarious.
why cant i stop reading this!
My mind has done this t3.gstatic.com/images?q=tbn:ANd9GcSVOogJu2JlBrifqssVrKF8mEVVklRQVWH142GXHGXzPloZYCgq from the shear amount of win and awesome in this story
BIG MAC!!! WE NEED YOU!
In pony hell, all the marshmallows are burnt.
I have not read the story yet, BUT the comments on here made me laugh so hard that I started to cough up some blood
...in a good way that is, and since I'm sick with some throat infection
...I think reading fanfiction is hazardous to my health at the moment.
BUT WHO CARES? ON WITH ZE PONIES!!!!!!!!!!
Holy crap this is goddamn amazing! I demand moar!
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I don't know. I can't either. The characters are SCARILY in character, and it's not TOO explicit... But it's still sodding hilarious. Talk about your unforeseen circumstances.
Looks like rarity
*puts on sunglasses*
Just got plowed.
YEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH
Like I said earlier, I hate it when sex and My Little Pony mixes. I watch the show for its innocence.
But this... This is just too good!
lol fluttershy in heat and big mac sees no problem... and luna in heat... dear celestia... that would be... lol
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What can I say about this story?
IT'S BUCKIN' EPIC, THAT'S WHAT IT IS!