Nice cover up Rainbow... there is no Zombie Pony in sight... *almost vomits* I think I'm going to be sick... There had better not be any detailed rape bit's up next!
Its only pony hell if you're there as an unwilling male. Personally, I'd like to go during that time as a Human so I could point and laugh at all the poor male ponies trying to remain gentlecolts whilst being chased by feral females. I'd be safe due to incompatible pheromones. ... ... Unless one of those Human-obsessed versions of Lyra happened to show up. Then I'd be in the same boat. But at least I could climb a tree to escape! Ponies can't climb! Then again she's a Unicorn...she could prolly chop down the tree with a kinetically-moved axe or just pull me out of it... I could swim away! Oh wait, ponies can swim too...
Oh my oh my, can you imagine it ? I enjoy those silly fanfics more than the original show and this one is truly "special" But my eyes sparkle as I await more chapters and hopefully more stories going that way
OH MY BUCKING GOD!!! I JUST REALIZED THAT CELESTIA ONCE CONTROLLED ALL 6 OF THE ELEMENTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Pony Hell indeed.
This is not very well written, very short detail of expression, and I can tell it's going to get even more sick next chapter.
I love it
Love the Holy Grail reference.
That innuendo Pinkie made, it burns. IT BURNS!
THE AUTHOR CAN NEVER BE FORGIVEN
NEVER
I loved the ending
-Glassed
haha teleported out
Holy Grail reference. Well! I'm off to the Ministry of Silly Walks.
So much win, it burns!!!! Why can't I be in Ponyville right now???!
Lemme get this straight
RD= Phelous
Dumbbell= Uwe Boll
That makes sense, right?
"Actually rode the dickens... Heh! Some of 'em couldn't walk afterwards, but then neither could ah for that matter..."
I really didn't need that.
Celestia damn you!
You have ruined the sacred sanctity of ponies forever! and you will go to hell...
I'll meet you there after I finish reading this story.
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"Trail of marshmallows"?
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You have just made my day.
Allow me to hop the Hell Train with the rest of you.
Oh god this is so bad, yet I must keep reading
the closest thing I can compare it to is a REALLY BAD romance novel
Love the way you end that with pony hell. Also the monty python in there. I LOLEd
i want to read more but i dont at the same time
So, how's it like being in pony hell?
anyway, I like this story. Shipping without the sex scenes.
"I'm infected with the... The T-Virus!"
I know dat feel
Yep...You're goin to hell...SPECIFICALLY for making readers envision Granny Smith Apple doing XXX stuff.
I'm going to hell for continuing to read this story of yours.... and liking it.
188294 You do??? Am I gonna have to hurt you in the upcoming RE video game, then? Because that takes place in Raccoon City.
DA BEST STORY i've read in comedy genre!!!!!!!
I love this so much!
Nice cover up Rainbow... there is no Zombie Pony in sight... *almost vomits* I think I'm going to be sick... There had better not be any detailed rape bit's up next!
187942OOH OOH CAN I BE CONDUCTOR???
BIG MAC NNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOO. you shall be remembered dear friend
<------<< Poor Doctor Whooves, being seduced and then abandoned, probably gonna get jumped by Twilight in some dark alley
ugh how do you favorite a story on here? because if im going to hell for reading this, im going to make damn sure everyone knows why i went to hell!
I.regret.nothing
I lol'ed at Granny Smith
Maniacal giggling in progress.
Let me go in and face the peril!
No, it's much to perilous
Grail quote for the win.
Its only pony hell if you're there as an unwilling male.
Personally, I'd like to go during that time as a Human so I could point and laugh at all the poor male ponies trying to remain gentlecolts whilst being chased by feral females. I'd be safe due to incompatible pheromones.
...
...
Unless one of those Human-obsessed versions of Lyra happened to show up. Then I'd be in the same boat. But at least I could climb a tree to escape! Ponies can't climb!
Then again she's a Unicorn...she could prolly chop down the tree with a kinetically-moved axe or just pull me out of it... I could swim away! Oh wait, ponies can swim too...
We all salute you Big Mac, you brave, brave bastard.
-Delta-
You know if they don't like having to handle them, I'll do it in their place
>.>
<.<
Don't judge me
But I must wonder, what's happening to little Fluttershy?
If you do go to pony hell, all the others who read this will probably go too if that makes you feel any better
I stopped here and said, "Wait a minute, what the heck am I reading?!"
""Let me guess... She remembered she can teleport, grabbed you, teleported out... And I'm talking to myself.""
Laughed REALLY hard
>It was being cut through by a saw, which, due to it's glow, was being guided by a unicorn's telekinesis.
>it's glow
Oh my oh my, can you imagine it ?
I enjoy those silly fanfics more than the original show and this one is truly "special"
But my eyes sparkle as I await more chapters and hopefully more stories going that way
Did rainbow dash really say Brony? Does she watch you clop or what?
You go to pony hell for rainbow dreaming 'ride 'em brony'
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"RIDE ME LIKE A TRAIL OF MARSHMALLOWS!"
"LAND O' GOSHEN!"
There are no words.
I'm sorry but Pinkie Pie scares me... o.o!
OH MY BUCKING GOD!!!
I JUST REALIZED THAT CELESTIA ONCE CONTROLLED ALL 6 OF THE ELEMENTS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
DAMN....
ride 'em brony!
EVERYPONY HOP ON THE PONY HELL TRAIN!
Ticket for one, please.
this is the most disGUSTING thing I have ever read... I LOVE IT!!! <--hehe giggity OH GOD WHY
jajaja, muy bueno, pobre Bigmac, pero el es valiente y cumplira con su deber XD
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. NO BIG MAAAAAAAAAAC, SPIKE NEEDS TO GET IN THERE!
big mac is best cockblocker
191369 Oh noes!! Those poor poor animals.
I hope I'm right.
Usually these kinds of fanfics is what I try to stay away from, but this one is hay-lary-ous.
Granny Smith;