A STAR IS BORN

by Zinger

The Fight:Acting A Hero

"Let go of her you basterd!!!" I yelled as I charged at the beast. Swinging my sword upwards striking him in the chest. It left a small cut but just enough for him to let go of the filly in his surprise. The filly out of his grasp I was able to catch her.

"YOU FILTHY MONKEY I'LL KILL YOU!!!" The monster yelled as he sent his tail down, in hopes of killing me.

SHIT!!!! SHIT!!! SHIT!!!! MOVE YOUR ASS!!!!!

"O fuck!!!" I yelled as the tail came at me. I jumped back in hope's of avoiding the attack. But it nicked me causing some of my blood to escape my body and a giant cut in my new jacket. I landed on my feet, wincing in pain. I looked at the filly, she had the look of fear in her eye's. She had a grey coat and a yellow mane, with two dolphins as a cutie mark. "You should probably go to your parents now." I said wincing in pain as I set her down. She ran behind me, probably to her parents. I was too busy looking at the white dinosaur looking thing to care.

"YOU FILTHY PIECE OF SHIT!!!! HOW DARE YOU CUT ME!!!! YOU'RE GOING TO PAY!!!!!!!" He said as he stood on his hind legs now reaching probably over 10 feet and charged me.

"O shit!!!!" I said as I tried to swing at him.

"NOT THIS TIME!!!" He roared as he sent his tail upward striking my waist all the way up to my left shoulder. A large amount of blood shot out from my massive wound. He showed his razor sharp teeth in a smile. My eyes went to the size of dinner plates as he swung his huge sharp claw into my entire left side. A loud cracking sound rang out as he made contact.

I howled in pain as I was sent sailing through the air. I hit the ground hard which intensified my pain. I heard aloud crunching sound. Looked over to see the monster was making his way over to me. "Tried to cry out for help, but all that came out where winmpers and gargles. Caused from the large amount of blood that filled my mouth. "I'M GOING TO DIE!!!!!! I'M GOING TO FUCKING, DIE HERE!!!! SOMEONE HELP ME PLEASE." Was the only thought that rang though my head.

---

"Princess what, do we do? That monster is going to kill the other creature!!!!!!!" Twilight Sparkle yelled to her mentor. In a pleading way.

Celestia looked at the Element's Of Harmony. "I don't know. I'm afraid we can do nothing. If you use the Elements, we could catch the other one in the cross fire" Celestia said, gaining a collective gasps.

"B-but Princess we can't. We can't let that monster kill the other one. It saved that filly. We need to help it!!!!" Fluttershy cried.

Twilight looked at the monster slowly approaching the one that saved a fillies life, not moments ago. She looked at the monster with determination in her eye's. Horn began to light a powerful purple glow. "Get away from him you monster!!!!!" Twilight screamed as she sent a bolt of energy at the monster. The bolt hit him directly on his left arm. To Twilights dismay, he only flinched. Fear struck her as the abomination turned his head towards her. His Souless green eye's piercing hers.

---

I looked at him in fear, as he slowly made his way to me. The monster must love to see his victims suffer. I closed my eye's hopeing that he would make it quick. The only sound I could hear was his footsteps and murmuring in the background.

"Get away from him you monster!!!!!" I heard someone yell followed by a loud electric crash. I opened my eye's to see that the monster's attention was no longer on me. I turned my head towards the sound, the act caused a great deal of pain. My eye's went to pin-pricks. The monster was facing the Princessess and The Main Six. Twilight was in the front with her horn shoot off purple sparks. "Run away please!" I said in gargles. The monster had a angry look on his face. He turned to me. "I'll finish you, of later. But....." He turned his head towards the beloved ponies. "I'll handle you all now, and save the trouble of doing it later." He said in a low creepy tone. The Elements and the Alicorns took stances, ready to fight him.

He began to approach them, but stopped. He suddenly held a face full of grimace. He let out a frustrated growl and sighed. I looked at the monster in fear and confusion as he turned his head towards me again. "Grrrr, I'll deal with you later. My job is done for now." The creature said as he took of into the forest.

My vision is getting blurry. I heard yelling and the clanking of metal off in his direction. Probably the guard's going after him. The light suddenly dimmed as a shadow was cast over me. I began to pray, that it wasn't another monster. My fear was washed away when my eye's trailed up a set of white legs and met with royal purple-pink eye's. It was Celestia. I tried to ask for help but all that came out was gurgling. Her horn began to light a glowing yellow, and the cool comfortable embrace of darkness took hold of me once again.

To Be Continued

Author's Note:

Tell me if I'm getting better, or worse. Sorry for not updating. I will update more frequently, promise. I just need a editor. And thanks for waiting. Sorry for any grammar fails.

Comments

[Lonepone]

Your staying about on par with your other chapters, although I noticed a lot of extra commas, and a few times when I think you meant to say off, you typed of. The story, however, is fantastic! I like. I like lots.

[Zinger]

2894503 Sorry I have to use a kindle. So my typing some times becomes difficult. Mostly with "of" and "off" sorry, or writing the same word twice. I'm glad you like it. I will update as soon as I can.

[Lonepone]

2894601 Don't worry about it too much. I got the same problem, I do all my writing of my iPod.

[Shadow-Dancer]

question were the hell did the sword come from lol

[Zinger]

2933532 He had it, with him. From Ch 1.

[Shadow-Dancer]

2933680 okay I did not notice How i do not know i will search my brain for answers

[rikusorasephiroth]

Update?

[Zinger]

3346189
Soon sorry. I haven't really had any time.

[rikusorasephiroth]

Update?