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How?!? I am looking at a picture of Twi and shining and then suddenly this fic updates again! Damn.
Fuck. YES.
EDIT: I think I love you.
3106106 Happy panda wolf is happy.
Hmmm. Page 63 and 34 stitches... Nah, to easy.
Oh and for my real comment; This chapter is bucking hilarious! It is perfect in every way possible. Just, yes. Yes!
Kinky...I love Kinky Cadance.
Also, time traveling Celestia is great.
Good Work.
Man, I should have been following this fic ages ago. This is incredible.
Totally correcting that mistake as of now.
Seriously, you KNOW a fic is good when you binge-read the entire thing in one sitting and come out of it feeling like a total zombie. THAT my friend is immersion. Good job.
--CG
3107388 Shhh.
Not all of my jokes can be top floor.
Wow, a drunk AND a cokehead? Bravo Ms. Punch. Bravo.
: And this, kids, is why we don't drink and write fanfics at the same time.
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...Quite.
Thank Celestia Humans are extinct in Equestria.
3107517 Is thirty-four stiches your way of crying out to the Internet about you stiches fetish? You don't have to be afraid, we will be there for your stiches identity crisis.
Well well, seems Shining has finally killed some of his Twilight interest because Luna did not invade his privacy and Cadence happens to love the Ponysutra, which Shining did not read well enough because Twilight told him to just give it to her.
Nice work Shining, at this rate, he'll be back to being normal, the thoughts of incest killed, Cadence being the happy mare she should be and Luna being lenient in being with her game system and having Shining Armor.
But, who is to say that would happen in this one.
3107590 That joke had me in stitches.
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kinky Cadence is Best Cadence
also i dare say Influence Shakespearicles is best Shakespearicles
P.S. are we gonna get a treat in your winter of trilogies? i mean just glimpses of the whole book i know you can do better than that, that whole book should be at least 3 chapters long or even a full story of its own i can see that story "The Adventures and Tribulations of Little Shiny, The Curse of the Ancient Book" and just for giggles do a epilogue as a POV from Little Shiny
P.S.S. mmmmm, let see, if Influence Berry Punch is best pony, and Influence Shakespearicles is best Shakespearicles omg i finally figured it out, the adventures of Berry Punch that you do are your own Adventures aren't they Shakespearicles images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb20120409111344/mlp/images/8/8d/Twilight_blowing_bubbles_with_pipe_S2E24.png
very clever good sir, very clever
All of the yes!
Gamer Luna? YES!
Derpy the one to introduce her to games? YES!
"But those were EXPENSIVE toxins!" YES!
Luna's lost bag saves Shiny's sorry plot a second time? YES!
Cadence ruins his sorry plot shortly afterward? YES!
Berry Punch is the greatest mare alive? ...sadly, no. Unless maybe if she repairs that wall and ambulance herself.
Shakespearicles the greatest writer alive? YES!
I have a feeling Luna won't be bothering Shining Armor so much anymore. And I think now we know what she was (or will be) doing during the whole wedding fiasco
Also, Cadence is a machine... but hopefully not literally With the number of FiW references in this story, it's not out of the question
this was fucking hilarious
I don't know how I feel about the whole cocaine reference... I mean, Equestria has alcohol, yes, but I believe you've ruined Berry Punch as a character for me. I just hope writing under the influence didn't mean THAT influence...
The rest of it was amazing though!
Your vocabulary has been thoroughly expanded by sentence enhancers when you're drunk.
Great chapter.
Fuck nuggets.
3107869 Shhh. It's a secret.
3108436 It was ground up Excedrin. (The headache medicine). Stops a hangover in it's tracks.
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I want you to think about something... This next sentence...
This statement is false.
Gamer Luna reference For The Win!
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I feel reminded of Charlie sheen from reading berry punch
Holy SHIT! Cadance near fucked him to death! And she didn't pass out from serotonin overload as well, she truly is the Goddess of Love and all other synonyms that means screwing someone senseless.
Now that was an amazing chapter
Oh my lord, poor Shining. He needs an IV, stat!
Berry Punch scares me. Most interesting chapter.
So you are Apparently going to reveal that all along Luna has been twilie acting as luna whenever theyve had sex. Especially when she turned into their mother, raped him and was flung out the window so she could teleport back to the house and make him forget. That ot twilie and luna have both been chrysalis all along.
Im onto you motherfucker!
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You need to stop, take a drink or ten, and stop
Yes, just yes. So much awesome. Oh, and I imagined Kristen Schaal as Berry Punch, because it totally fits. This is an addiction. BUT IT'S A DAMN GOOD ADDICTION!
Loved everything about this chapter GAMER LUNA FTW!!!!
3107587 Oh, the extinction wasn't her idea.
Who do you think wrote that chapter of the PonySutra?
Cool, I've found someone who gets inspiration in the same way I do.
LET'S DRINK OURSELVES SO FAR UNDER THE TABLE WE FORGET ARE NAMES; YYYYEEEEEEAAAAAAHHHHH!!!!!!!!
Must be newest "Ms. Pacmane"
"Cow free" you made me do a true LOL
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Pacmane...
I am so angry at that pun. But I can't stop smiling! help!
also its good to see that Celestia took Berry Punch to a Christmas Carol like experience, and absolutely nothing was learned.
I'm so glad you're back, welcome back.
I think my head just exploded
Oh this was a fun one.
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*OUR NAMES!
My condolences to your editor.
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Editor? I DON'T NEED NO STINKIN' EDITOR!!!!!
No, but seriously, I wrote that comment when I was also heavily intoxicated.
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Nah, it's obviously Pac-Mare, or the weirdly named ripoff, Mr. Pac-Mare.
T'was a good thing I wasn't snacking while I was reading, I would have choked to death 10x over laughing at the puns made
That was INSANE.
>X-Cube GameStation
I... you... AWESOME!
I have no words to properly describe this chapter.
Awesome comes to mind but is for some reason not adequate...
Should have sent a poet....
I have had times like that......
to avoid something is that like putting it into a void so that you never have to deal with it or when you become sober enough it just hits you all at once?
did you set yourself a goal of putting as many subtle references into this chapter as you possibly could, then decided f**k it, add ALL the references!
cos either way this chapter was hysterical (not that the others weren't but even in a comedy like this, this chapter felt like the comic relief chapter, lovin it.)
Yes, there definitely is.
4581483 Button Smash is based on a canon pony playing an arcade game in Hearts an Hooves episode, so videogames are definitely canon.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0WCbSo5cqMw During "this ones too young".
Same with cinemas, which appeared in the Babs ep.
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