Octavia's life never did anything fun. Sometimes she feels like she's doomed to play the cello and study basic school skills for the rest of her life, all under the watchful eye of her strict mother. That is, until somepony pulls her out of
2944636 Hey, um, hi Just wanted to say that I really really like your story and writing. I randomly decided I wanted to read some TaviScratch and I stumbled upon this gem of a story
Whatever may come, I just thought I'd let you know that the way you write is nothing short of graceful. The words all flow so naturally, the characters are spot on for the setting, and most importantly, everything feels real. The way all the characters and environments interact and, possibly even better, react, is very realistic and in character.
I think my favourite moment so far was when Vinyl comforted Octavia, chasing away the bad thoughts. I've had a moment like that myself, so maybe it's because I relate, but the scenes where we see Octavia's insecurities, and especially the hug scene, is just... fuzzy. She becomes so much more of a real person because we see her internal struggle and resolution to it.
Thank you for listening to my rant, assuming you got this far You're a great writer and I can't wait to see where this glorious ship will sail I patiently await the next chapter of what is probably my favourite story in a long time Keep chugging on, I believe in you!
OHH Octavia, Look at you!!!
Waiting it out. Update will come. I know it...
2944636 Hey, um, hi
Just wanted to say that I really really like your story and writing. I randomly decided I wanted to read some TaviScratch and I stumbled upon this gem of a story
Whatever may come, I just thought I'd let you know that the way you write is nothing short of graceful. The words all flow so naturally, the characters are spot on for the setting, and most importantly, everything feels real.
The way all the characters and environments interact and, possibly even better, react, is very realistic and in character.
I think my favourite moment so far was when Vinyl comforted Octavia, chasing away the bad thoughts. I've had a moment like that myself, so maybe it's because I relate, but the scenes where we see Octavia's insecurities, and especially the hug scene, is just... fuzzy. She becomes so much more of a real person because we see her internal struggle and resolution to it.
Thank you for listening to my rant, assuming you got this far
You're a great writer and I can't wait to see where this glorious ship will sail
I patiently await the next chapter of what is probably my favourite story in a long time
Keep chugging on, I believe in you!