Thane is called upon by his closest friend Tesla to help with an experiment; testing a new invention called the ghost portal. When things go awry, Thane must step in to deal with the creature from the other side.
I've been writing for years but this is my first go at fan fiction. Oh joy!
Thane is called upon by his closest friend Tesla to help with an experiment; testing a new invention called the ghost portal. When things go awry, Thane must step in to deal with the creature from the other side.
“Doesn’t make you look any less rediculous,”
It's Ridiculous, not Rediculous.
“We’ll, it simply means that the pure essence of the ghost zone is inside your body”
why do you put a ' in it?
Please don't be mad at me, i'm just pointing out a few Errors.
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Why would I be mad? That's really helpful. Thank you.
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If you don't mind, i can track your story and point out any mistake and/or Grammar errors i could find in your next chapter.