• Member Since 24th Jan, 2012
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Shadowstar38


I've been writing for years but this is my first go at fan fiction. Oh joy!

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Thane is called upon by his closest friend Tesla to help with an experiment; testing a new invention called the ghost portal. When things go awry, Thane must step in to deal with the creature from the other side.

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“Doesn’t make you look any less rediculous,”
It's Ridiculous, not Rediculous.

We’ll, it simply means that the pure essence of the ghost zone is inside your body”
why do you put a ' in it?

Please don't be mad at me, i'm just pointing out a few Errors. :ajsmug:

183678

Why would I be mad? That's really helpful. Thank you.

184003
If you don't mind, i can track your story and point out any mistake and/or Grammar errors i could find in your next chapter.

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