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Quantum_Shift


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I will bite, people do not seem to like this :/

its interesting but Im a bit conflicted whether I like it or not

you seem to go off on tangents a lot especial in the first chapter where you show off a bunch of your favorite music

This is actually really well done, sorry for any misspellings, my iPod us stupid. I am liking every bit of this; transported away from the main show, instead to a wealthier pony's home, daresay richer than Filthy Rich; secret innuendos, making me chuckle silently; and executing it with lovely prose. I applaud you, fair sir. Keep up the good work!

Saw that this was added to HiE Sifters and I was like 'hmm, I might take a look at this', so I will later. I promise.

Is it really considered Human if he's turned into a pony?

When I saw the title I got scared that someone SSH into my brain and stole my ideas! but atlest no, no one stole my thoughts.
I have a paranoia complex it you haven't noticed.

2384511 Yes, because it involves a person who was originally human, and begins with an actual human, so even though he's a pony now, he wasn't one to begin with, and that means you need the tag. And the fact that he's used to being human is mentioned somewhat frequently.

2385018 Alright, that's understandable. I feel there should be a separate tag for it, though.

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A 'Transformation' tag would be nice, along with a 'Horror' tag, not just Dark.

2391108 Yeah. Though "Transformation" could be misconstrued somewhat easily.

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Very much so, hence why there would be a description of what it entailed, like there should be with the other tags.
I'd even write the descriptions FOR Knighty if he didn't want to do them himself and that was the only reason they weren't implemented...

Not sure what all the dislikes there are on this...

2442435
Me neither. I just wish people would leave a comment about what they dislike when they thumbs down, it's really hard to improve without solid advice.

The pony eating tent has claimed a new trio of victims!

2384511
This may be a late reply, but yes, according to the FiMFiction acceptance board, who told me to add the tag to Z-Type for that reason.

very good story so far. :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

link is broken.:raritydespair:

What song was planed for this? I just moved to the Necromancer's theme

I have to admit I'm confused. Why there are so many dislikes? This is really good.

3164376
Non-canon grimdark pseudo-Equestria "SI" fic. No canon characters at all.

Why do you think?

It's an interesting story on its own merits... but it could almost get the 50 Shades of Grey fanfic-to-real-novel treatment....

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Thank you.

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Oh, this was: [Here]

3164376
Because some people don't like pony stories that aren't in equestria; because some people don't like HiE stories; because some people downvote things they find for the fun of it; because some people felt this story deserved it. There's plenty of reasons, but if nobody tells me what they are, exactly, I can't improve it.

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Non-canon grimdark pseudo-Equestria "SI" fic. No canon characters at all.

I'm not sure what the 'SI' stands for, but this isn't grimdark. It has it's bad moments, but so does the real world. Not everyone is a horrible person, and while horrible things happen, they don't happen universally, and there are plenty of groups trying to quash it.
But yes, that more-or-less sums up what is likely a significant fraction of the downvotes' reasoning.

It's an interesting story on its own merits... but it could almost get the 50 Shades of Grey fanfic-to-real-novel treatment....

While I thank you for the praise, please don't mention FSoG in connection to my story again. When I write, I'm going to build it entirely in my own realm, with no recycled characters. As well, many things don't work with the assumptions required. Turning into a different species is all well and good, but how would I use an equally established setting from the get-go?
These aren't stories with just me writing them, they are full-on RP sessions that are getting written down for others to enjoy.

Well, I like this. A lot. Only thing I would change is longer chapters but that's because I'm greedy and i want more.

So, MORE PLOX!!!:pinkiecrazy:





Edit: also, Cole reminds me of myself ><

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Heh, I'll tell his player that.

That last part just thinking how it sounded in my mind Scared the fuck out me :twilightoops:

I love how summer just loses it when her friends are in danger.:rainbowdetermined2:

Also, that poor stallion.... I don't think I will be able to uncross my legs for quite a while.:twilightsheepish:

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Well, don't ever get on a demon's bad side, then.

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Heh, well, she has no real sense of loss, and she doesn't really want to get it. Also, note her comments about her parents.
As for the 'Hero', well... some people dig their own graves, and some pour BBQ sauce on their balls.

Quite interesting !! MOR PLZ !!

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