Number VIII, Axel, the flurry of flames, awakes in Equestria after saving his friends by sacrificing himself. Axel tries to find a way back home, to help save Sora and his friends, in this magical land. But his plans are stopped when he finds out that he is not the only Organization member in Equestria. Xemnas, Xigbar, Xaldin, Vexen, Lexaus, Zexion, Saix, Demyx, Luxord, Marluxia, and Larxene have also appeared in this realm. The members break into three different sides, each one with a different goal. But who will win, and will Equestria be forever shadowed in an everlasting darkness?
Special thanks to Timaeus for editing this, to Perpetual Motion for editing this, to thepinkparty for proofreading this, and to BioChemicalWolfGear for helping me get the plot line made.
And new special, super awesome, thanks to my buddy Card Shuffle for becoming my newest editor. (Nicest guy you'll ever meet.)
And another new thanks to Uber_Shy for becoming the newest member on my team of editors! Thank you guys for editing this! It makes it SOOOOOOOOO much better. 
Edit: Featured on March 16th, 2013. What the hell guys.
Edit: If you haven't gotten past the Betwixt and Between realm in Kingdom Hearts II then WARNING SPOILERS!
It's very good, I couldn't see any grammer errors, the storyline has great potential. All in all, this is going in my favorites and I'm going to stalk you.
definitely going to follow this
I'll definately follow this.
2273425 2274133 2274218 Thanks guys! It's really great to hear people appreciate my work!
This is glorious. I always really liked Axel and it made me quite sad when he died on me, I am absolutely keeping track of this and giving it a thumb up.
Wish Roxas was there. Only good Roxas fic here hasn't been updated in a while. Still, this has found a nice place of anticipation with me. Love it!
2274292 Awesome! I actually cried when Axel died, I was pretty young though and grew up with Kingdom Hearts.
I'll try to get the next chapter out during my spring break.
2274329 Yeah. Sorry I'm not going to include Roxas in this because he didn't really fade. He just went back into Sora.
Okay yes. I pray this doesn't go the way of most KH/MLP fics.
Why did I comment here?!
This is going to be good.
I saw one mistake. You spelled Kairi wrong and put Kaira. Other then that, the story is good.
2274359 Out of curiosity, what is the way of most KH/MLP fics? I haven't read that many so consider me uninformed.
2274376 Well I'll fix that, thanks for noticing!
Good job so far. Can't wait to see where it goes from here.
YES, I love axel and kingdom hearts!!!
Allright lets see...
Puting this on my top kh fics, check.
-Kiryu
Oh I am going to enjoy this a lot.
Trixie and Xemnas should team up in this. She already has an 'X' in her name, and she's almost as hammy as he is.
As for who I think will team up, Luxord should definitely be with Axel. He and Roxas were pretty chummy in 358/2 Days. Demyx was an airhead, so he'd probably be their ally as well. I dunno of anyone else who'd side with Axel otherwise.
2274629 Trixie isn't really going to be a character in this.
I can include her a couple times in the background, maybe even get a couple conversations with her and a couple of the characters.
2274380 consider yourself happily uninformed then because I'm trying my best to erase those memories. I don't want them memorized.
2274661 Ha. I see what you did thar. Also love your profile pic. SCREW GRAVITY!
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I was just making fun of Xemnas, it wasn't really a suggestion. But if you're offering...
Applebloom doesn't have a yellow mane. Plus it should be red mane, not red hair. Just noticed that, but either way, the story is great! I will keep an eye on this one.
2274726 I don't know how that happened. Ah well. Imma fix it.
2274667 Sure why not. I could add a couple appearances by Trixie. Maybe even get Trixie in a fight with Vexen or some other Organization member.
From what I understood of canon and then my own headcanon:
Xemnas, Saix, and Xigbar
Axel, Luxord, and Demyx
Xaldin, Vexen, Lexaus, and Zexion.
Marluxia and Larxene are wild cards in my opinion since Marl would never group with Xemnas or Axel and Larxene I guess would follow Marluxia.
The group of four just bounce off each others personality so well I can't see them not working together unless there was a good reason.
Now for errors and general conniption causing quotes:
Keyblade is one word. Basically your first sentence scarred me into conniptions.
Because a wizard must wear pants. Is there a missing comedy tag?
Goofy... spoke wisdom.
Whatever you say author. Were hanging by this sentence you've said.
Beside Keyblade
Donald only knows fire ice and lightning spells? Also wasn't the spell thunder not lightning?
Through not threw.
I'm certain there were more mistakes I didn't notice near the end but I was having to much fun reading to notice.
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She could fight Zexion, a rival illusionist. His Lexicon thing could remind her of Twilight, sending her into a blind rage or something.
2274880 Hmm. Maybe, but if Trixie was boasting about her power in front of Vexen he could then laugh and say that she couldn't even beat a single member. She challenges Vexen and looses because Vexen isn't that weak.
2274878 Thanks for noticing these mistakes. But Goofy has spoken words of wisdom to Sora, remember in Castle Oblivion. Donald's spells are fire, blizzard, and thunder, but their elements are fire, ice, and lightning. That's what I was saying. I'm glad you enjoyed it and I'll try to get the next chapter out...sometime.
2274975 I remember nothing of castle oblivion since i only ever made it through the gameboy edition years ago. And okay then for the other stuff. Now maybe I should go through CoM again now shouldn't I?
2275002 If you want. You could easily just look up the cut-scenes on YouTube. I believe the guy who has them is called pspgameboycutscenes.
2275021 But then I won't get the joy of playing a childhood favorite again.
There is not supposed to be a space in 'keyblade', other than that i didnt notice any glaring errors.
Interesting so far certainly.
edit: disregard what i said, you fixed it
2275026 True but Axel's personality was changed between the Gameboy and PS2 versions of Chain of Memories. But whatever floats your boat.
Man, loved the game and I could tell this hold promise! :D
Definitely gonna fave and like!!!
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I am officially the worst editor ever lol
2275267 Half of that was just little comments about stuff. You aren't that bad.
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Hahahahahaha fair enough. Didn't help that I tried to edit with a bunch of other things on my plate at the same time. Also loving the profile pic, SCREW GRAVITY!
2275324 Inside joke with an author that has long since forgotten. And really if you were that bad you wouldn't have been asked to edit in the first place right?
2275357 Out of curiosity, would that author be Sorren? I remember a blog post about this actually. With regards to editing, it helps that I live in the same house as our wonderful author here
2275366 Okay so it isn't so much an inside joke is it. It was totally a thing we had going before he blogged about it.
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Grammar score: 9.5/10 (always room to improve
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Pros: Good pacing, Good blend of KH into MLP, Plot is solid and has great potential.
Cons: not many in the way of grammar, everything seems solid so congratulate your editor.
Notes: After long last I get to see your Kingdom Hearts Fanfic, and it was worth the wait. You're taking a character that I know very little about save from KH2 which I loved to death. (need to play the spin-off) I always liked Axles character in KH2 and I'm glad your using him as your main character. He always reminded me of Renji from Bleach (If you haven't seen it please do it's a fantastic anime). I look forward to seeing how this hot headed nobody reacts to a world of colorful ponies.
I hope you liked your review, You already know about Guardian so no need to tell you about that. However I would like to extend an invitation to join my team for building this story, I need someone to bounce Ideas off and help shape this beast of a story I have in my head. send me a Pm if interested.
2275391 The blog post was a while ago, and it's still completely awesome that you're still doing it by the way. The main reason I didn't was because my profile is an image of the TARDIS floating around in space. Gravity has no meaning for me
2275415 Gravity has meaning. It's just the mentioned letters that don't. Else-wise the tardis would never stay grounded.
2275421 This is fact
2275427 And somehow I knew this and don't watch the show.
2275439 O_o
So totally awesome! My favorite Org. XIII member gets to be awesome in Equestria! Love it!
ERMAHGERD, YERS!
2275446 I don't even watch Friendship is Magic.. well no more than half of the first season.