Macintosh braves the Ghost Rim in order to rescue his sister, while Princess Luna and her royal guard attempt to keep vicious cutthroats at bay.
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The amount of awesome with your stories is too damn high!!! That said, I'm loving the side story so far, as well as Diamond in the Rough. I swear, you, Peregrine and JJ write the best colabs I've ever seen! I'm completely captivated, enthralled and otherwise hypnotized by the amazing, enticing, colorful, gritty and down-to-earth worlds you paint with your words. Seriously, The Laughing Shadow, Fool's Gold, DitR, and other's you've written have permanently captured my attention! It makes me happy to know that at the end of a long day, I can come home, sit down in front of my computer and know that the story I'm about to read isn't just words on a screen; they're a portal to an entirely different universe! I think I speak for all of your readers when I say thank you so much for taking the time and energy to give us a glimpse into your vivid imagination. For most, it's an enlightening experience. For me, it's that and so much more. Once again, thank you so much, Merc! You do us all so proud! Keep up the good work, mate!
I agree with you, 2337687 , 100%...no wait more like 95%. I'm not that good with words but if I was I'm pretty sure I would of written exactly what wrote (give or take) but we will never know.
Zecora's way of speaking always makes me smile.
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Eh, 95% is good enough. At least you understand where I'm coming from. And I agree with you about Zecora's speech patterns. I like the way she was described in this story.
This is a fun story. Zecora is awesome x) That little paragraph about Luna being the 'Nightmare Knight' makes me want to read a story that's essentially a precursor to this modern day Torani, following Celestia and Luna as they travel and found their kingdom, doing whatever awesome epic adventure stuff they do. That would be a hell of a project though :b But yeah, this is a nice story so far.
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Thanks for the kind words, fellas.
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Just for the record that -5% is for
nothing truly ever has 100% of my attention ADHD FTW
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2341723 Keep up the good story dynamics (I think that's the right word to describe that) and my kind words shall continue.....not sure what to write here, I just have an obsessive need to reply to the people who reply to my comment.
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I appreciate that more than I can say (though I wish you might give some of my other stories some love :P ). We hope to only ever keep entertaining and delighting, and improve our skills and deliver even better stories. There's so much Heistverse to share. We hope you read and love it all, as much as we love writing it.
Couldn't ask for a better pair of fellow writers and, better yet, friends like Mercand JJ.
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I'll say that prequel ideas exist, heh. Keep letting us know what thoughts and curiosities you have and wish to see answered.
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It saddens me to say that I have been procrastinating about reading DITR and I don't know why.
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Well, you could read this while you're procrastinating on reading DITR.
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