“Well, i am shocked; you think you better thank trixie?! Well tough luck, you can’t stop the great and powerful Trixie! I will burn all of Ponyville to the ground,” Trixie slammed her glass of 12/10 vodka on the table and collapsed to the floor.
AL just sighed, “Would you like some help, Trixie?”
Trixie popped her head onto the wooden bar, “How you know ma name?” Trixie sat for another moment before realizing, “oh , i told ya.”
“I’ll take that as a yes. You got any family or friends?” when he looked at Trixie she had a very silly look on her face; her tongue was hanging out and her hat backwards.
“I gots one,” she reached into her hat and pulled out a paper slip, “Try this!”
As Trixie started to set the slip onto the table, she started to fall back. Alex was scared of what the floor would do to her. He acted on a quick impulse and jumped over the bar’s counter, thankfully catching her. Trixie still had her idiotic look on her face and did the unthinkable...
“Can i haz another shot?”
“Sure just stay still while i make it. don’t move, at all, from this spot. ok?”
Trixie just nodded impatiently.
He walked around the counter and sat her onto the floor. She did as she was instructed and sat still. AL started to walk away and into the back section of the bar. he made sure to snatch the slip of paper. Just like every other night, he dialed up the number and waited to get yelled at. The phone was answered sooner than expected
“Hello, this is Twilight Sparkle,” she was as happy as ever.
“Um- well one of your friends or family is here and she needs you, could you please get her?”
A kid could be heard in the background, “Spike go away! Hehe sorry. Who is it?”
“Well she is blue and is calling her-”
“What! Where is she? Is she in danger?”
“Um, no, she is with me, and she is drunk.”
“What? What is her name?”
“She has been calling herself, Trix-”
The phone was hung up the last thing he could hear was the slamming of a phone to a wall.
That was the first in a while somepony hung up before him. He was now mad, “Gee well that ended well! and now i’m stuck with a drunk mare! What my luck brings me.”
AL left the back room to accommodate the drunken ball of joy. Stranger than normal, she was gone. A letter was left where she sat. It was covered in alcohol and crumbled up. it read:
dear bar tendor guy,
im sorry that i left, but i will pay you back sooon enough.
sincerily, trxiie the , eh fuck it this time.
P.S. i liked your cutie mark what dose it mean?
P.S.S. probly should have asked earlyer, but, do you have a pillow?
He pulled his back cover on more tight, trying to hide his cutie mark, “Well i guess i’ll be seeing her around. Girl sure can drank... god damn it is late.”
part two of Trixie coming soon
2277080>>2277066>>2276797 ok it is here and ready/ read it and tell me what i edited wrong this time
2277226 she didn't realy want to interven i guess. it is like with kids if you d every thing for them then they will never grow up..
i am very sorry if i didn't portray the mare corectly. she just never realy helps. liek pushing all of ponyviles problems onto the mane six.
sorry i just don't like sounding mean
Huh.
Say, do you happen to know zombiebwains? Your writing is similar.
Your short description is a train wreck.
Poor spelling, little adherence to basic grammar, absolutely no attempts made to characterize the players or set up the scene.
Gonna just assume this is a trollfic and downvote.
Well... at least you got the first paragraph of your description fixed. Anyways, just like what others keep telling me: Get a proofreader/editor to help you.
(Lol nope. Still didn't get myself one.)
Edit: From what I've read on your page, You have a reading disorder (Which is kind of sad). And for that, no more downvote for you.
2278181 nope i shall look for him later
2278471 sorry i will re edit it later
2278478 i am sorry you didn't like it but it isn't a real troll fic, like one yu would plan out and such but call it as you may.
2278734 i asked not to be told about that, i want to be judged as a bad writer, and i have 3 edtors the one for this is italian, so ya it was bound to fail
2279028
Don't, he just kinda writes like you but worse and any story of his that's not his first one is just torture. So basically you write better and have MUCH better ideas.
2283192 i find that very sweet of you, but i must. if thier is another author out thier that writes worst than me i could help them out and such...
maybe he is mixed up in some way?! im mental maybe he got it worst...
and my ideas arn't original i just get bord and start to pound on the keys
2284302
Eh. He's more original, but kinda in a bad way. Like as i zombie's ideas are absolutely disgusting.
He's also been gone for years on end.
Also, just a word of advice, I suggest you type up your fics in Word, or if you don't have that, OpenOffice, as those have functions that correct your mistakes.
2288367 ok and i ahve one thing to say about you comparing me to him (if you ment writing style.) i write nothing like him he is followng script write format. a new line for a new speeker and such.
but non the less he is a good writer.
Ahh, your story is interesting and quite unique. I'll keep tabs on this and keep reading it, and I must say I'm quite amused.
2298483 next up date is today, and mybe soon if he is up and ready he is italian im american in a spanish class. what fun
ohhhhhh yaaaaaa, mmyyyy dad just walked in with a bag of doritos and i was like hell yess