Ponies in Ponyville have lost their kind touch and have started to bully and mistreat some of the lovely residents. these are the events.
After one year and the Elements of Harmony put away for good, caos starts to upraise in some lives.
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*doesn't offer any sympathy*
this is why celestia gon' die
2276760 That is what Celestia always does nothing different from canon here.
2276778
2276790 I didn't disagree with that point.
I was just adding one of my own.
you should name the filly
2276797
twilight for ruling princess 2013
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2276817 i would tap that
2276760what was she video tapping, (i forgot)
2276778 she never helps and never shows simathy aslong as the whole kindom, (and luna sometimes) are happy
2276814 filly's name is not michalla. she is my bisexual friend, (in real life)
2276797 well don't celestia is caring to steal the vigin ness of her gaurds but can't help her sister... FUCK YOU DITCH.
i just got bord so here you guys are
2276908 oh ok
2276908
she was video taping that pony harassing mai luna
and offering no sympathy at all
mark my words, she will one day place the straw that break the camels back with luna and twilight
and then twilight shalt kill celestia and usurp the throne...
and there will be much rejoicing in the stiggerzz house-hold
2276934 next part is coming soon so ya
i am going to type it up
2276940 ok that seems fair. but a quick sugestion... why not insteade of thorns you place a flaming ball of thissles into her vagin till she ither dies or coughs up a thissile on fire.
ya know just a sugestion
.
next chapter is coming soon
2276963
sounds like a plan
2276944 alright
2276983>>2276980 ok so is trixie sexy or what?
2276987 humanized sure
2277002 ok then we are almost on the same page.
2277019
2277039 ok next part in almost 10 minutes, i have to edit it
2277057 alright
2276987
trixie is bloody sexy
but twilight is sexier
2277080 spike is sexyerpony, i already showed you the pic right???
pinkie pie would tape that shit
2277080>>2277066>>2276797 ok it is here and ready/ read it and tell me what i edited wrong this time
why celestia just sit there and watch??????
2277226 she didn't realy want to interven i guess. it is like with kids if you d every thing for them then they will never grow up..
i am very sorry if i didn't portray the mare corectly. she just never realy helps.
liek pushing all of ponyviles problems onto the mane six.
sorry i just don't like sounding mean
Huh.
Say, do you happen to know zombiebwains? Your writing is similar.
Your short description is a train wreck.
Poor spelling, little adherence to basic grammar, absolutely no attempts made to characterize the players or set up the scene.
Gonna just assume this is a trollfic and downvote.
Well... at least you got the first paragraph of your description fixed. Anyways, just like what others keep telling me: Get a proofreader/editor to help you.
(Lol nope. Still didn't get myself one.)
Edit: From what I've read on your page, You have a reading disorder (Which is kind of sad). And for that, no more downvote for you.
2278181 nope i shall look for him later
2278471 sorry i will re edit it later
2278478 i am sorry you didn't like it but it isn't a real troll fic, like one yu would plan out and such
but call it as you may.
2278734 i asked not to be told about that, i want to be judged as a bad writer, and i have 3 edtors the one for this is italian, so ya it was bound to fail
2279028
Don't, he just kinda writes like you but worse and any story of his that's not his first one is just torture. So basically you write better and have MUCH better ideas.
2283192 i find that very sweet of you, but i must. if thier is another author out thier that writes worst than me i could help them out and such...
maybe he is mixed up in some way?! im mental maybe he got it worst...
and my ideas arn't original i just get bord and start to pound on the keys
2284302
Eh. He's more original, but kinda in a bad way. Like as i zombie's ideas are absolutely disgusting.
He's also been gone for years on end.
Also, just a word of advice, I suggest you type up your fics in Word, or if you don't have that, OpenOffice, as those have functions that correct your mistakes.
2288367 ok and i ahve one thing to say about you comparing me to him (if you ment writing style.) i write nothing like him he is followng script write format. a new line for a new speeker and such.
but non the less he is a good writer.
Ahh, your story is interesting and quite unique. I'll keep tabs on this and keep reading it, and I must say I'm quite amused.
2298483 next up date is today, and mybe soon if he is up and ready
he is italian im american in a spanish class. what fun
ohhhhhh yaaaaaa, mmyyyy dad just walked in with a bag of doritos and i was like hell yess
2299969 yes sure
whatt is it i can do for you?
luna is best pony with trixie
You should probably change man to stallion
2301078 true. very true
sht i have to do a lot
2302191
2302224 resident evil 6 is ok resident evil 4 is better
2302231 yes that is so fucking true, but RE6 scared me shitless at times, RE4 EASN'T TO SCARY. MY RE4 broke and i just got six. so
execpt the boss fights they are long and i was amo like all the time. my pistol ran out and i have no more space
2303093 I wasn't a big fan of the plot in 6 there no real main villain
and some of the transformations are either stupid or goofy 
Grasshopper legs
dude made out of flys
the transformations just don't make sense. I thought they would all be bug related but some turn into lizards and others turn into hulks//dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/misc_unsuresweetie_flip.png
And then one of the bosses turns into a t-rex//dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/sillyfilly_Sweetie_Belle.png
It's just so random//dl.dropbox.com/u/31471793/FiMFiction/emoticons/shrug_Rainbow_Dash.png
2303161 yes, i have no clue about the flys, btu all the insects ya not my favorite. but the t-rex, holy shit, how much calsiam did that bitch eat. he went fucking beast mode and shit. i died like ten hundered times,
and then after that i have to fight him once more, i was like ...
...
...
...
....
fuck this, im sttarting over, screew this and all the inholy offsring. ...
computer and ponies.
oh and is the ending of crish good? leons is to hard right now
2303324 the ending for Chris is ok although i have no idea why jill isn't in this game
And yes the t-rex is hard....
2303348 lolz. who is jill? hold on im looking her up (jill is a bitch, maybe she died.
)
but for the t-rex boss i unloaded 250 bullets into him and 3 remote bombs, and then i find out i have to smash his face in.
um i am going to delete the convosation part of the coments okay.
2303463 have you ever played any of the older resident evil like 1 or 3 cause jill is in them. also for the t-rex aim for the eye balls there the weakpoints