A human is sent to Equestria where Celestia rules with an iron hoof. He is tortured and brought to the brink of insanity. When he escapes with Chrysalis, all hell will break loose
LUNA?!!! HOLY SHITY, NOW THINGS ARE GETTING GOOD Although your OC seems to be getting a bit Gray-Sue, might want to be careful about that. Gods, the Goddess of the Night working against her older sister, yeah, I love this already
I wanted to say something, but I didn’t know what it was I wanted to say. My mouth just began to systematically open and close until I crossed my arms and then covered it with my hand.
“Is that right”
I don’t know what’s better, that fact you executed that perfectly or the fact that I would do the same thing
This should have a comedy tag, considering the use of the protagonist's sarcasm.
2222855 Sadly the comedy and dark tag conflict, so I had to choose one or the other.
It could be a dark comedy, but whatever rocks your boat. You may be right, though.
i assuming the reason Luna is on their side is because she also does not approve of her sister's actions as well?
damn, you sure are good with your hands , three awesome chapters in basically 2 days.
2222898 Correct.
2222925 Yep. I got the Midas touch!
2222950 I was thinking more of this:
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I MEAN:
hehehe
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2222950 will there be a back story of sorts to explain why celestia and the mane 6 are like this?
2223034 It's an alternate universe, technically, they were always like this. So no.
freak yeah lunas a good guy!
2222868 man, morbid comedy is awesome. And thst what you get when the two tags are mixed.
LUNA?!!! HOLY SHITY, NOW THINGS ARE GETTING GOOD Although your OC seems to be getting a bit Gray-Sue, might want to be careful about that. Gods, the Goddess of the Night working against her older sister, yeah, I love this already
Saw that Luna part coming about 7 seconds before I read the sentence... Lovin' this story!
Anyone else think of gywn Lord of cinder when he started using fire?
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So, you ever coming back to this, or is the story dead?
I don’t know what’s better, that fact you executed that perfectly or the fact that I would do the same thing