[Currently being rewritten for EQD submission (hopefully a successful one)]
Since the dawn of time, ponies have asked countless questions about their surroundings and their lives in order to obtain the answers they seek. Twilight Sparkle, a studious young mare, has asked many a question during her life, and has received answers quite easily. When she finds one question that she cannot answer, however, she goes berserk. Of all her friends, of all the ponies in Equestria even, she ought to know how to answer this simple question….
…Or is the question really that simple?
This story follows canon up to the end of the second season. Rated teen for some humor.
Chapters (1)
I have said this before... I love this story! I-I love reading!
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I'm an egghead!
"Suddenly a shot rang out. "
It was a dark and stormy night...
“I’m all right—I’m AAALLL RIGHT!!!” - Pinkie Pie is best Uncle Billy.
2245151 I'm quite surprised as to how many references you're picking up.
"Why did the chicken cross the road"
"To get to the other side"
The other side is a double meaning for death.
You're welcome.
2249459 Perhaps it is; perhaps it isn't. Perhaps I will NEVER finish the story so that you will NEVER know for sure! MWAHAHAHAHA!
But seriously, thanks for stopping by. I've read your stuff; it's good. *nods*
I hate being that guy that says something serious, but I'm gonna be honest here, if you'd just focus on the whole Twilight spazzing about why a chicken would cross the road, you could really make an exceptional fiction.
However, the use of things like
and
, while I understand the humor you're attempting to use, it'd fit better it a different fic, methinks. Honestly, if your wondering if I'm just commenting on it to be a douche, I'm not.
I'm commenting because I now REALLY want to see this fic about Twilight spazzing about that question beefed up into the awesome fic it can be. It really seems like a Twily thing to do
either way, take my advice or don't, up to you
2253208 Thanks for taking some time to comment. You don't have to worry about "being the guy that says something serious." I know my fic isn't perfect. I will never be able to make it perfect, either to my standards or anyone else's standards. So, I thank you for having the courage/willingness to let me know how you think I can improve my story. It does mean a lot to me.
I do understand your point, and I agree that Twilight's thought processes would make for a good/better focus. In fact, I might add in some extra chapters focusing on just that. I really just brushed lightly over the scenes where Twilight is thinking about the question, so I think that I'll try to push myself to delve into Twilight spazzing about the question. I honestly don't want to change the ending (simply because I've practically finished the story and have an ending that I already want to use), but again, I'll probably create some extra scenes (probably as chapters) to focus on Twilight logically thinking about chickens and such.
Again, thanks for the feedback; it's given me some great inspiration for this story.
*takes a small bite*
Hey, this is good!
2268415 *takes bite* It is indeed. HAVE SOME MORE, DO YOU HEAR? EAT IT! EAT IT ALL!