Epilogue, or Space Chaser has Swag!
Twilight walked up to the grey pony. “Umm… hi, Wheatley.”
“Hi, Twilight. Um… how are you? Isn’t the sun lovely?”
“It’s night.”
“Oh… really? Whoops.”
Twilight was glad that somepony chose that moment to tap her on the shoulder. It was Derpy.
“Hey Twilight, sorry if I’m interrupting.”
“No, it’s fine! What is it?”
“I was just wondering… who that was?” She said, pointing at the grey pony that was now busily sharing stories with everypony in Sugarcube Corner.
Twilight sighed. “Oh, that’s Space Chaser.”
“Do you know where he lives?”
“Actually, he just moved here. As did Wheatley.”
“Really that’s great! He’s really cute!”
“What?”
"I mean…. His eyes are so dreamy—er… his body’s so steamy—No, I’m saying… his mane is so creamy… Gotta go!” She ran so fast she seemed to disappear in a wisp of smoke. Twilight thought she saw her blush, and she thought she understood why.
…………………….
Dark… cold… barren… So much dirt… and rocks… a light in the distance… food…
……………………
“And then WHOOSH! We were on the moon, in space, where there’s no gravity and it’s so quiet you can hear a blade of grass hit a piece of wood!”
“Wow…”
“That’s sounds amazing, Space Chaser…”
Twilight didn’t know why all the ponies were infatuated by this pony. He was just a normal pony with a playfully flirty mane, with bright yellow eyes that were as warm as the sun… who had been on so many adventures…. Who was the funniest pony she had ever met, and who she hoped was free Friday night… dammit.
“Yup, me and my buddy Wheatley were stuck… in SPACE! Ooh, that word still gives me the chills every time I say it; space. Did you know that where we come from, we have telescopes that can see so far we can see trees on other planets billions of miles away?”
“That’s so cool…”
“I’d love to be on another planet with you…”
“No, with me!”
Wheatley wondered how it was possible for the Space Core, or rather Space Chaser, could become so likable so quickly. He was just about to chime in on the story when—
BANG
The door slammed open to reveal a hideous creature. She appeared to be an orange and white pony, with black hair that lay flat on her face and back. She had hideous growths on her hoofs, which were also mutated beyond recognition. Her front legs were noticeably skinnier than her hind legs, which explained why she only walked on her back limbs. There was also a unusual limb coming out of her calves, a silver bone that continued down to the bottom of her feet, giving her a literal bounce to her step. She was obviously scared by the way she gawked at the ponies, but no sound came from her mouth. Wheatley and Space Chaser sprang up at the sight of her.
“CHELL!!!!”
It IS DDDDOOOONNNNEEEEE! Thanks to everyone whose stuck through it, and helped me along the way! I really hope that the end won't disappoint. Also, as far as a sequel, I do not foresee one, but if enough people whine about it I have a few ideas...
, I'll come back and edit once I've read this from start to finish.
1014509 I edited as much as I could, but I hate it, so you WILL find a bajillion things wrong. IF you point them out, though, I will correct them!
1014546 Honestly, the reason I put that comment there was because I've had this in my read later queue for quite a while, but I'm just starting it now, since I saw Epilogue and your note. Starting my read-through... Now!
make it happen with chell go
would love to see a sequal to this
You threw in that bit at the end just to annoy us, didn't you. You have no intention of explaining it.
1014739Actually, I did it becaus I think it's better than a sequel. Some of my favorite shows and movies end with a horribly annoying cliffhanger, and never finish them. Kinda deep symbolism in my opinion, all the answers cannot come, stories never really have an ending. Then again, this is a fiction about talking ponies...
Either way, you guys can have fun imagining a part two!!!
You added Chell in the end but no story?
Sequel Please!
1014720 it is a little farfetched but there's no way to know what Wheatley would do in Equestria, with Luna, whatever. This is just my opinion, if you want you can write one you like better!
Personally, I would love to see a sequel, especially if you bring in the other cores, from both games.
Aaaand how the hell could you end with that and not expect your dedicated readers to be ready to bash your face into your keyboard, in the hopes of getting the sequel out faster?
1014913That end was actually the reason I wrote this story, believe it or not!
Don't worry, i have a possible second story ending in mind...
This last chapter felt a little off. I mean like in a way that a sequel seems a little bit awkward unless it starts a few seconds later.
1015111 next one will be a little more serious, more relationships (NOT LIKE THAT PEOPLE!!!) and deeper stuff hopefully. But you guys have to remember, there's one more fanfic I want to finish or do work on before any new projects, so just wait...
CHELL!!!
Thank GOD! A COMPLETE fic that's been added to my Read Later list!
86 and counting!
1014461 "...but if enough people whine about it..."
WHINE!!!!!!!!
1015431 "that's not whining, THIS IS WHINING!!!"
I made a funny!
1015447
No, you made a punny. It's different.
But honestly...
This... is... whining... Why would you do that? Leaving us with such a cruel, sadistic cliffhanger... oh the horror...
1015561 Oooh, turret cubes, theres an idea...
I just read the entire story from start to finish. It was pretty good.
But seriously, what the hell is up with that cliffhanger? Honestly, I just feel like you want people to ask for a sequel.
Consider this me whining for a sequel.
That ending... That cliffhanger... Of all the things that could possibly happen, this is the worst. Possible. Thing. (collapses onto couch)
Sequel?
...You put THAT at the end, simply so people would rage at the cliffhanger.
You're the most cruel person I've ever seen....
....kudos to you.
You will continue or I won't love you any more!
HA HA HA, I AM 666TH VIEW!
I just had to write something about it...
saw the description of the pony forms and was reminded of this
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That ending is similar to an idea I have for a fic that I'll probably not get around to writing in its entirety. Let's just say that once you add one crossover, especially with the one I started my idea with, you can add them all…
actually, i am kinda hoping for a shipfic sequel, even though i usually hate all forms of shipping.
But, i mean seriously, Luna x Wheatly?
Space core/chaser x twilight?
I GOTTA see that!
1029277 MAKE THIS HAPPEN AUTHER!!!
would fav but its not a reread next one? maby?
OMG I JUMPED OUTA MAH CHAIR WHEN THEY SAID CHELL!!!!!!!! LOLLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL!!!!!NEEED MOAR! oh wait have moar thnx!
Only one thing to say...