• Member Since 2nd Sep, 2012
  • offline last seen Jan 3rd, 2014

VioletMichaelis


Hello! I'm an author as a hobby and supposedly a very inviting and friendly person. If you have the time, please check out my stories!

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The story of how Vinyl Scratch met Octavia, and how their bond grew.

Chapters (3)
Comments ( 10 )

I'm pretty sure it's "cellist."

this can be a really good story, you are off to a good start but you need to change a few things.

I would drop the first person approach, but that is just me.

Take your time while writing and make longer chapter. read and re-read what you wrote over and over, that way you can make it sound like you want it. take your time is the big one

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I wasn't comfortable with first person, so it was probably a very bad move. I'll look over it and fix it up when my head isn't derpy and sick, thanks for taing the time to read it! :pinkiehappy:

Yeah it'd be cellist too, whoops ^^;

a bit short but it was really nice to read :ajsmug:

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Thankyou for taking the time to leave me a lovely comment, :raritystarry:
there will definitely be more, I can't stop my fingers from tapping away.:derpytongue2:
I hope to see more of you in the future:pinkiesmile:

Party hard or go home! Haha. I couldn't stop smiling as I read this through :pinkiehappy: that is a good thing!

Keep up the good work, friend! :rainbowkiss:

ummm never seen octavia like that before on word to more reading.

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I'll have to produce something else soon. They're my favorites to write about, so if you're watching me it'll show up soon :twilightsmile:

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