Dangit, I didn't notice the "Mature" and "Sex" tags until it was too late. Cheesy romance combined with bad, pointless clop. Only idiots would do something like that on their first actual date, and they are NOT idiots- not by a long shot. It seems out of character to be that irresponsible.

Considering your other stories are much more successful, I guess you could just chalk this up to "can't win 'em all". Every writer is bound to have a flop eventually.

2558093 Well their both drunk and have been talking a long time over the internet so I would say that covers t least some of the ground between them.

If this is a humanized story you should say so in the description. Don't assume everyone read the first story and knows.

*appplauds* This was a very cool read indeed; very entertaining. :3

I'm willing to give it a chance. Favorited!

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dat headcanon...

nerds get freaky too man. in fact its the book worms that really get addicted as opposed to the "whores" like rarity.

2558268 I seem to have missed the drunk part. I must have been reading too quickly. I should really learn to stop doing that.

ok... says incomplete, but then we have...

The End

Is this gonna be continued?

erect pink mipples

pink mipples

mipples

You broke my sides. I had trouble finishing the story after that.

there have been loads of really weird reports of some kind of blue box disappearing in broad daylight."

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2558851Well it has a human tag and a huamnized Twilight on the cover.

2560493 yep, couldn't help myselt to reference it.

2560097 Yes it will plus I will have someone else do a re-look over it to polish this first one.

Very good. I thought it well done enough that I faved and upvoted it, and I would like to see the story continued.

its like some of these commenters cant read

.there have been loads of really weird reports of some kind of blue box disappearing in broad daylight."

I have nothing particular to say about this statement.
Great way to start. I would suggest editing out the words "The End" if this story is continuing.

Hmm, what is The Doctor up to now

Uhh~ Time to read

I was the 69 like

Also its me lunar 457 tis new account

2723279 well congrats on that. You may also be responsible for making it cross the 1,000 view mark as well, but I'm not entirely sure. Anyway good going, all of you

Did that condom really have to be purple?