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Seems good, I get the feeling Dashie would be the sort to be nervous about the subject of love
Go on...
2157350 I like that song!
Also, I see what you did there... 
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Yay PinkieDash.
A good start for your first fic. I hope Rainbow has some crazy schemes to try and find out who Pinkie Pie has a crush on.
Good stuff, not sure what the silent dislikes are for.
Silver out!
Not much of a shipping person, and I try to not single myself out towards one type of shipping. I like it thoug. Well written
Fingers crossed for PinkieSpike...
I enjoy this.
Please, do continue.
Nice set up. This seems interesting.
It's awesome you have nothing to worry about its a very good fic way better than mine anyway
2157350ya I can see that and this related
"You're" should be "your" - an easy way to remember the difference is that "you're" stands for "you are." When in doubt, just see if the substitution works.
Remove "that" - it doesn't really make sense in context.
Overall, your grammar's actually pretty good compared to other fics I read and you seem to have a good interpretation of Rainbow's personality. It's a bit too soon for me to make any definitive judgments, but I look forward to seeing how this turns out.
2198195 Thank you for pointing that out!
I'm almost there with the next chapter. I'm glad you like it so far! 
It's good.
Silver out!
*looks to comment above this one*
I think it's trying to communicate with us
A nice little story here so far. The formatting is a bit odd for me, but it does fit how I would imagine Rainbow Dash speaking to herself, or other ponies.
I'll give it a fave for now but hold off on an upvote
2273410 okie dokie! I'm glad you like it!
I like it
But I'm sure the crush is spike
Very well made, I'm really excited fer da new chap
Poor Dashie's having a panic attack
Finally
2682796 Haha, yeah! Sorry for the wait. Got busy with Finals and Vacation and such. C:
2682814I Know how Finals can get. you know i am currently rereading the first two chapters cuz I forgot what was going on.
2682826 Hehe. I had to reread them too.
2682840oh God that's bad when the author doesn't even remember whats going on
2682847 Yeah. I figured it out though, thankfully.
2682875Okay, now that i am caught up, I have to ask: this is gonna end up like party of one, but the other way around, isn't it? I mean, judging from your sig and the group i found this story in it is obvius who pinkies crush is. we arent reading to find out, were reading to see how Dashie finds out.
2682958 That last part is true, in fact. However, no, this will not be exactly a flipped sort of Party of One. It may be somewhat similar since Dash is in a state of panic, but it won't end exactly like Party of One did.
2682963well that's obvious the ponies involved have different personalities and are panicking for different reasons. cant wait to see it
2682985 Heh, I'll try to be quicker with the next few chapters....
This is Rainbow Dash birthday.
2683049 Hehe. You sure?
i wonder if it's spike that pinkie has a crush on
I almost did not get alerted to the update.
3090553 OH NOEZ!
3090597I know right?
It would have been The. WORST, possible, THING!
3090606 The horror! THE HORROR!!!
BEST SHIP EVER! This is by FAR my favorite pinkie dash story!
It's an 'I love Rainbow dash' party!
3090611 I cant wait for the next chapter... I LOVE IT!
(sorry i commented twice 
)
3243505 Ohhhmmyygosh! I'm soo glad you like it!
And don't worry abut the comments, it really means a lot 
3244214 i am working on one of my own, if you wouldn't mind to look at it
Oh and its inspired by you, (so was my account, fyi you can type it up on your phone, that's what i do!
NO ONE KNOWS!
)
3244245 Awesome! I never knew I could provide inspiration..
I'll be sure to check it out! 
3244303 YAY!
I'm excited for a new chapter! This story is great!!!
3373152 Thanks!!
3373152 ikr! because rd is all like
becasue she doesnt know WHO pinkie likes, while WE know pinkie likes rd. i am all like
to rd, while i am like 
< PINKIE!!! JUST... ER... AGGAHAAHHAHAGAGAGHAHGAHAGHAGHAGHAHG! ) to pinkie
EDIT: Ok, now i am embarrased with myself
Great First Fim Fiction!