I was all excited, until I saw Blueblood. I'll still read it though!

Well....that was gross.

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I specifically outlined what the story contained at the very top of the text...

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Hey schmaltz.

Care to link the reddit thread for a lazy fuck like me?

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http://www.fimfiction.net/group/12/clopfics/thread/11871/nostalgia-schmaltzs-clopscene-request-thread

"Any other stallion would have felt immense jealousy at such a large size difference, but it only seemed to be arousing Shining Armor further; the stallion somewhat eager to please such a well-endowed prince."

Shining Armor's such a size queen. Does that mean he outranks Princess Cadance?

"His eyes widened slightly though as he felt the rubber toy press up against his backdoor, the tip of it rubbing over the tight pucker a couple times before pushing forward and penetrating him."

No lube? That's gotta hurt like a bitch. I'm amazed Shining Armor is able to concentrate.

"The prince had not orgasmed in at least a week to save up for this event, causing his balls to be quite swollen, roughly the size of large coconuts."

I imagine the rest of this scene playing out while this song plays in the background.

"Meanwhile, outside the throne room, Twilight had been taking a stroll through the castle, unable to sleep that night."

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"What is going on in there...?" she thought as she approached the large doors, the sounds only getting louder.

Gently pushing the left door open, she peeked inside and gasped at what she saw; her jaw dropping completely."

I'll be honest. This part felt a little rushed. I would've liked some speculation on Twilight's part. Maybe she hears Shining Armor and thinks he with Cadance. She doesn't want to spy on her brother, so she turns to leave, but stops when she hears another stallions voice. That brings her back.

"Despite this seemingly horrific sight, the alicorn princess' wings spread and stood straight up with a slight "pomf" sound, twitching lightly above her back while her cheeks blushed a deep purple."

Nice use of alicorn wingboners. Twilight's going to be going "pomf" a lot more often from now on...

"Twilight meanwhile, turned away in disgust, closing her eyes and groaning a bit, feeling somewhat aroused, but rather sick to her stomach from all the conflicting emotions caused by this discovery. Biting her lip softly, she quickly fled the throne room and galloped away towards the nearest bathroom, still blushing deeply in embarrassment."

Twilight obviously prefers the seclusion of the bathroom when she clops. She's just going to rub one out while thinking about her brother having steamy gay sex.

"Blueblood aimed his shaft downward, releasing a few gushes of seed directly onto Shining Armor’s face, painting it completely white."

So, no change then?
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"...he glanced down at the other white stallion, now even whiter..."

How white is he?
He's so white, he can't jump.
He's so white, he uses flour as a bronzer.
He's so white, when he first heard the song ‘Baby Got Back,’ he wondered where Baby had gotten back from.

"...due to being soaked all over with thick seed, along with laying in a puddle of his own seed."

Don't be afraid to crack open the old "dirty thesaurus" every now and then. Instead of repeating the word "seed," there are a myriad of other options at your disposal to describe copious amounts of male reproductive material. For example:
pecker spit, baby batter, love butter, liquid pearls, splooge, jizz, jism, cum, salty yogurt, stud root extract, guppy glue, cock snot, tockley tapioca, etc...

"Come, Blueblood dear...show my husband how to properly buck a mare."

"You're...mnh...s-so huge..." he groaned, blushing deeply and glancing back at Blueblood with a lustful look in his eyes.
"Hehe...mm...of course he's nice and huge, my love...if only you could be as big as him." Cadence giggled

I don't know why, but I've always found the emasculating taunts directed at a male character to be highly arousing. Needless to say, I loved it whenever Cadance treats Shining Armor like shit.

He's so willing to please her, that I eventually started to feel a little sorry for him.

“Harder, my studs! Buck your princess nice and rough!”

Correct me if I'm wrong, but isn't Blueblood inside Shining Armor? I think the only stallion bucking Cadance at this moment is her husband.

After his second long, bountiful orgasm ended, Blueblood sighed in bliss, holding his member deep inside Shining Armor to hold all of the cum inside him, his hooves still stroking and rubbing over the stallion's belly, which was bloated to the point where one would think he was pregnant.

I've got to say, I wasn't as big a fan of the "cum-inflation" scenes as I thought I'd be. They were alright, but felt slightly out of place in this story.

“Mmnh, yes dear...” Shining Armor sighed lightly, rather disappointed in himself that he failed to please his wife, but still glad that she enjoyed the overall experience. “I’ll try harder next time...I promise.”

I feel bad for Shining Armor. He needs more positive reinforcement in his life. Maybe Twilight could fill that gap...

“Hehe, you’d better, darling.” Cadence giggled and slurped the stallion’s snout gently before getting up from the throne, stretching her legs and wings a bit. “Because I’m perfectly happy playing with just Blueblood, you know.” she teased, cuddling gently against Blueblood’s side and nuzzling his cheek gently.

What a bitch.

I thought it was an excellent story overall. Another triumph from the multifaceted Nostalgia Schmaltz!

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I'll be honest. This part felt a little rushed. I would've liked some speculation on Twilight's part.

I wasn't exactly trying to put a lot of effort into it.

Correct me if I'm wrong, but isn't Blueblood inside Shining Armor? I think the only stallion bucking Cadance at this moment is her husband.

And Blueblood's rough thrusts are assisting Shining Armor's!

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"I wasn't exactly trying to put a lot of effort into it."

To produce clop of this quality, while only expending the minimum amount of effort, is quite impressive.

Thanks again or the awesome read!

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I meant the Twilight part. It pretty much does apply to the rest of the story though; I wasn't really thinking very hard about the storyline, just mashing my keyboard and churning out clop.

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Keep mashing and churning, my friend! You're quite good at it!

You get a thumb for putting happens in relative detail at the top of the chapter, instead of having me read through it and hope. The first chapter doesn't float my boat but I'll be looking out for others.

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Don't worry; up next is some more vanilla stuff.

Yeaaa!!!!!!!

That was hawt.

Don't know why the scene with Twilight was in there since it didn't really go anywhere and nothing really happened because of it. Dat wingboner though. That marks my first fic where the new Alicorn Twilight was in it.

I enjoyed the submissive Shining and the talk down he got throughout the fic a lot more than I thought I would. Didn't care much for the cum inflation, but it was rather minimal so it didn't bug me.

Overall a hawt clop!

~Have a good one.

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Don't know why the scene with Twilight was in there since it didn't really go anywhere and nothing really happened because of it.

'Tis what the requester wanted. What I didn't know is that he wanted more of it than what I gave him.

Heh, not bad. Submissive Shining is pretty damn hot. Blueblood wasn't bad either, with the way he was encouraging him. Cadance was a total bitch, though.

The depiction of cum-filling was rather pointlessly unrealistic; that did nothing for me. And the size of the testicles has very little to do with ejaculate volume. Most semen production is done by the prostate and the seminal glands. As a result, it's totally possible for a castrated male to ejaculate at near-full volume. Actually, that's something I'd like to see in a fic, if only for the dumb comments it would generate about how it's supposedly impossible for a gelding to cum. ...And I've gone completely off-topic.

Anyway, I liked this chapter.

I need to find a couple and do this.

for all that warning there was a surprising/disappointing lack about of submissive shining.....