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Mane 6 fillies147 stories ·130 members

The Apple Doesn't Fall Far from the Tree

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Applejack knew it was going to happen eventually, but she never dreamed that it would be this soon. She walks into the room where her father lies on his deathbed, waiting for the inevitable.

Cover art by myself.
Also, this is my very first fanfiction, for anything, EVER. :D

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TwizzleDragon

TwizzleDragon #1 · Feb 17th, 2013 · · ·

I like it, though it is just one giant text wall, which I suggest you break that up so the haters don't massively downvote just because of that.

peachcheeks12

peachcheeks12 #2 · Feb 17th, 2013 · · ·

Omg. Just. Literally tearing up here! Brief, but well written, all the same. The tone and the atmosphere you created is so very real. I'm favoriting this, no doubt!

eillahwolf

eillahwolf #3 · Feb 17th, 2013 · · ·

2133367 I put a space between each paragraph, if that's what you mean. Does that make it any better? Sorry, I'm new to this... But thank you very much for the helpful feedback!

TwizzleDragon

TwizzleDragon #4 · Feb 17th, 2013 · · ·

2133452
Looks a lot better, I'm glad you fixed it before those grammar nazi's came by and tore this beautiful work apart for something so silly.

Jubilancy

Jubilancy #5 · Feb 17th, 2013 · · ·

I've never cried so much in my life. My mom died a year ago. (Two years on Sept. 22) and this story just made me lose it. I never got to say goodbye to my mom either, my dad woke me after it happened. This story just makes me wish I coulda had that final goodbye.

ThatBronyWithTheClipOns