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2118398 I plan on building it, he will have opportunities to sleep with some mares, but I don't plan on just making the story one sex scene after another.
2118456 Ah. So it /is/ harem then? We'll see how it goes. Harem fics, when done right, can be magnificent. Keep in mind that they are also really hard to pull off.
2118545 I wouldn't know.
it's a bit cliché, but it's readable
loving this! already added it to my favorites
Which type of anthro? Refer to this: http://privatex007.deviantart.com/art/Anthro-Types-and-Adoptable-305193748
I just want to know before I start reading so I don't confuse myself.
I like this guy.
2118684 I'd say its about 20% out of 80%.
2118705 Okay, thanks.
Note to self, strangle spy for being a spy
Wow!! Nice! Lyra lol....
And all I could think of when Vinyl was listening to the I-pod was "Somewhere I Belong" By Linkin Park, does this story have anything to do with that?
That was fast
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Might I inquire as to why you did not enjoy the story?
nice this story is going pretty good!
Saw humanized, "AAAAAHHHHHH YYYEEEEAAAHHHH!"
notices a new anthro tag in description, "AAAAAAAHHHHH NNNNNOOOOOO."
holy shit this got featured.......not like i'm jealous or anything
Alright... Honestly, this chapter felt incredibly rushed as I read through it, both pacing and especially the conversations. I suspect you choose to let the reader imagine how the scenery unfolds as the character(s) walks to and fro between location and how fast paced conversations are. If not... well, it felt like that anyway - and that's not a good thing.
Uhm.. Hi, random talk to self... (I will get to "I’ve already got three girls numbers." later)
I agree with the person inside his head.
Anyway, this was a pretty bland chapter to be perfectly honest. I couldn't really get into it as I read. Well, maybe a little when he kicked the crap out of those pegasi (even if that was completely random); which brings me to another medium I'd like to point out:
Judging by how he handle himself in combat, Isaac is apparently a 5 star class fighter - considering he can handle 2-3 people ganging up on him no problem - and we have no idea why. Sure, it was mentioned in the first chapter that he somewhat consider himself stronger than most, but that doesn't automatically make him a combat god. Hell, even special forces get the living fuck punched out of them from time to time.
Whatever the case, let's have some exposition!
By the way, not only is he a combat specialist but he's a ladies man too. Three girls' numbers within the first hour of his stay in Ponyville.
....
Remember the thing I said about how harem fics can work if done right? Yeah... even if this isn't a harem fic as I first expected it really has taken a turn for the worse.
nice track for kickin' ass
2118863 I was going to spend ten minutes writing something, but you basically summed it all up for me.
Thanks.
And to the author... What that guy below me said.
2118863 I'll explain the combat skills soon.
2118845 Sorry for the failed expectations, I was browsing deviantart when I found it and I knew it had to be my cover photo. Sorry again.
2117284
How in the hell did your comment get a downvote for being understanding?
2118919 Someone has to do it. Stick around for the all "fun" I'll be having. Or better yet, don't; because I do it because I like HiE.
2118934 Delightful. I'm sure his at least 4 years of martial art practice will be a fine addition to his background!
That is the reason behind his skills... right?
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say Silentpegasus i think this would be a better cover
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Props to you, good sir! I was sarcastically thinking that the "song" was going to be either Weird Al's "Weasel Stomping Day" or Agent Tex's theme. Still, you threw in a RvB song anyway. Good on ya mate!
As for the story, I look forward to the next chapter (hopefully chapterS) I'm still a little confused with the whole "everypony has a phone" deal, but what can ya do? It's all good.
P.S. Actually, the fact that he received the numbers of Lyra, Ditzy, and motha-bucking VINYL form two emotions in my heart...
1.) I'm totally friggin' jelly.
2.) It reminds me of friggin' Pokémon Soul Silver with every single person that you come across gives you their BUCKING NUMBERS!!!
Ignore the rage.
Bottom line: I love the story. Keep going at it!
update again,soon
2119003 I did see that one on Deviant art and I considered it but I like the one I picked.
2118942
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If this ends up harem, I swear I'm going to be done. So many good fics, end up harem. I'm not much a fan of that type of shiz. Not to be critical, but just an opinion that's all.
2119057 ok its just that the pic shows the girls as humans and in the story their anthros?
2118545 Agreed. I've got a humanized story going, and it's not exactly easy to build a relationship between multiple characters while keeping them all believable.
To the author: I'll give this a go, but I will reserve judgment for the time being. Just trust me when I say that convincing romance is a pain in the ass to pull off well. This is coming from an author who has written more romance material than everything else combined.
Isaac:
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2119139 HAHA! Spoiler alert! Suits ensures!
2119083
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And others want to light the match that starts it
2118845
This this this.
2119163 I agree completely and would love to light that match
If I may say, this seems a bit rushed.
Either way, I'll give it a shot.
2119129 Yeah I know, I'm a big fan of your work.
2119103 Relax it won't. Isaac Will have to make a choice.
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Dead spaaaaaacccceeeeeee
2119377 Really? All of my works, or just some?
2119151
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2119389 I've read most of them, always a good read.
*Looks at title.*
Linkin Park anyone?
I see what you did there...
the man is a player! one day and already has three mare's numbers.
Dang. he deserves a for that.
I really don't want to be mean here, but the story is rushed, you need a new editor if you have one because there are quite a few errors still, and the plot is beyond generic. I really really really don't want to be mean, but I don't understand why this is featured.
I mean to ask, you said Steve at some parts of the story, who is Steve?
Oh and the next chapter will come out soon?