People go missing all the time and are never heard from again. What if I told you that we've been to a place... a place with so much magic, it'll make your head spin. I'm talking the Magic of Friendship. And me and My cousin were there
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HYES herd!!![:derpytongue2:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/derpytongue2.png)
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It would be I interesting if nightmare moon came into the picture.. It would kind of be herding, and kind of not.
Yes, do it, my vote go YES to the herd idea, the 2 goddess, the bedroom fun will be double. Oh I know you already did it and I thank you for that…but if they start a herd, can you make 2 tinniest thing, the first one (with permission/ inspiration of CyanFoxtrot and his story of Unexpected Paths) is making the legendary 24 hours no stop sex with them.
And the second it will be make something that guaranty Nathan legend as the king. Make love to Celestia AND Luna, to the point they will walk funny the next day. I'm talking about of S type of love making, the one in with the mare will feel so levels of pleasure that she will just black out, and will fell like she die for a couple of minutes the next day (Yeah I know is pushing it, but I will very grateful of you can make what no other author had make so far)
Oh and before he does that, can I suggest something. A guys trip. I propose, he his father, cosign, uncle as well as male friends that he make in Equestria just come to an agreement to go camping somewhere and have a nice time. (He and his dad need to clear the air after all) And he can discuss the idea of a herd, before agreeing to do it. (Maybe have some adventure along the way)
What did you think?
Heh it appears Celestia will arrive in the picture :3
Mjeaaah i approve!
For the love of Celestia... YES![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
I approve of the herd idea
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I accept all hate...
YOLO!!!!!
Not crazy about herding, but if it's celestia then what the hell go for it!![:moustache:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/moustache.png)
This was just as amazing as always. Although I can't seem to understand why you wrote it as "modal". Isn't it spelled "model"?
2560975 I have sexdaily.![:facehoof:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/facehoof.png)
I mean dyslexia...
Fcuk
Ideas for Nathan's herd:
(Luna accepted her apology, surely she can accept her into the harem...especially since Luna would obviously be the matriarch and get to override the other members when it comes to who can and/or can't fuck Nathan when and where)
1. Madam Pompador (because she is still on good terms with Luna [even saved Nathan's life] and she is very flirtatious with Nathan)
2. Celestia (because she wants his D, and who can resist Sunny D/Sunbutt)
3. Applejack
4. Cadence (because she wants to be treated right and wants a real man to give her the D)
5. Lilly (could be used later as a pseudo incest point; the main reason why I say Lilly could be a part of his herd is because she stated that she remembers her father [who she made us believe was nice] which means this love for Nathan would clearly not be the love between a daughter and a father. This leaves the either romantic love or sibling love...and since Nathan is married, you can see why you could use this as a pseudo incest point.)
6. Fleur de leis (what if this one time thing made Fleur's future coitus acts with Fancy Pants have her yearning for Nathan's touch? Hell, the bits with the French were a nice touch, and obviously left Fleur quite impressed with him)
7. Shining Gem (who cares if she be a changeling? She can still feed from his love and give her own back!)
8. Perhaps a student at his university where he teaches Human stuff (mare who is a human fanatic [such as Lyra])
9. That "Escort" that Luna called to fuck Nathan after getting his measurements (you didn't really name her or anything... could give the poor mare a character)
Got quite a couple of mistakes that I found and am bringing to your attention as a simple kind gesture! :D
Before that, heres my formula for quotes and corrections:
mistake from the quote -> mistake fixed from the quote
hornieness -> horniness
hard as diamond. -> as hard as a diamond.
had in that got me. -> had that got me.
Wouldn't it be 'Unhoof' instead of Unhand?
mares -> mare's
modal -> model (it's a super model. Not a super modal because modal is with textures and shii...so Fleur isn't a super texture. I've seen you use 'modal' in other locations, too. So, you may want to check other chapters where you mentioned Fleur with a simple CTRL+F and typing in "modal")
...I was tied to, -> ...I was previously tied to,
nex. -> next.
insider -> inside
I could my pants -> I could feel my pants
Somethings -> Some things
Je vais à avec! means "I come with along with" I assume she was trying to say something along the lines of "I'm going to come!" which translates into French as Je vais jouir!
Another thing I have noticed you using incorrectly is the past tense of "tell". You confuse the past tense with such a unique homophone that I cannot help but feel that you are doing it on purpose. What you say is "tolled" instead of the correct "told" which are two completely different words. "Told" is the past tense of tell which means some one...well... told some one else something already. "Tolled" means that one has been charged with a toll in the past. For example, He was tolled $47.52 for his misdemeanor. A synonym for "Tolled" is "Fined"