I like this. Seriously, there needs to be more clop like this. It was sweet and sexy, and Rainbow was more in character here than I've seen her in some other fanfics. I could almost actually see Rainbow saying these things.
With her giving up on the Wonderbolts... excellent for her. If anything, she's too good for them. I mean, it kind of stinks that Rainbow's not going to be a one of them, but she's got it prime at Ponyville. Still, maybe she could get sub for Wonderbolts. She is a national hero.
I've been spending a lot of time on Ponychan lately, and something I've noticed come up in discussion often is how little Dash has talked about the Wonderbolts this season. The only time I can think of off the top of my head is when they came to try and stop Spike from destroying the town, and failed miserably. I still think she idolizes Spitfire and Soarin, but not in a way that she wants to join their ranks anymore. Maybe meet them and get some autographs or a chance to fly with them, but that's all.
As much as I like clopfics....I feel that this was maybe rushed a bit too much. As a Dash fan myself, I can see apparent that there may be some minimal events missing. Also, yeah, kind of a text wall as times, maybe break it up a little?
Well, anyway, still great job on this story, and of the previous chapters too of this.
Hard to say, honestly. I've been kicking around a story with Rarity for a while, but I never got around to it and the mood kind of left me. I usually write the stories if I have a particular character bugging me for most of a day, and today just happened to be Rainbow. We'll see what form inspiration takes in the future.
HumanXDash is definitely my favorite ship. I don't know why, but it is. Anyway, this definitely takes the cake for "My Favorite Rainbow Dash Clops With Humans In Them"
I have to admit, I'm starting to see where the "ship Rainbow Dash with everything!" comes from. It's very fun to write about her having sex. Especially with her being submissive. Glad you liked it.
in b4 "You will never share an intimate moment with " you just know she'd abduct the first random human Twilight zaps in before he gets sent home. It gets boring being immortal, ya know! Well unless you're goofy like me and never tire of wargames and hopping around the net and blowing things up. I would totally dig it.
I've thought about it, but honestly... I don't think there'd be a point to it. I've already done a few chapters of Molestia, and I'll probably keep doing more, so there's no reason to give her a YWN.
Not unless a large number of readers asked for it...
625533 Ah alrighty. I figured you had one alone planned but I can see her basically just slamming into someone else's story and taking it over too.
How about one with after you finish with the mains or whenever it strikes you? I know she doesn't crop up on cloppers' radar (clopdar?) often so that might be an interesting idea. It's definitely got some elements that won't be available for others, like having the person pose as part of the foreplay process, or taking pictures of their time together. It can also go either way, as overly business-like (just another photo shoot, with benefits) or disgustingly sweet (revealing her true nature when not basking in the limelight) I love the way this is written and it also kind of surprised me because the title of the series implies (at least to me) it would have been of a partially trolly nature where it gets interrupted before anything happens.
I'm not experienced enough with certain writing styles to give certain kinds of fics a go so I just like to throw around ideas when I do land upon something that interests me. Everything under my belt prior to mlp is war scenes/series (Wing Commander, X-com, Exo-squad, Strife, Battletech, etc) and so I wouldn't be able to resist throwing random pitched battles into the damned things after a few hundred words. That might be funny for comedic troll purposes one day though.
714044 If there's a chapter with Luna (my main hope is for Lyra though), could you add something about bananas, and end it with her getting shot to the moon?
733376 >Distracting personal condition that needs immediate attention I actually had to read that a few times to understand that. I must be off my game today. Have fun!
Eh, I may or may not. This is kind of like my scrap pile, or more specifically "I want to write sexy things about a certain character, but I don't have a good story in mind for it" I could expand it more, but I'd honestly rather concentrate on improving my other stories, or creating completely new ones.
Oh my gosh! I think my pant got a bit tighter after reading this. I love how Rainbow is such a tease! She cant be quite the girlish type that nopony ever gets to see! MLP personality test says im a lot like Rainbow Dash and I must give you credit for this very fine piece of work! Love the foreplay you started out with!
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I like this. Seriously, there needs to be more clop like this. It was sweet and sexy, and Rainbow was more in character here than I've seen her in some other fanfics. I could almost actually see Rainbow saying these things.
With her giving up on the Wonderbolts... excellent for her. If anything, she's too good for them. I mean, it kind of stinks that Rainbow's not going to be a one of them, but she's got it prime at Ponyville. Still, maybe she could get sub for Wonderbolts. She is a national hero.
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I've been spending a lot of time on Ponychan lately, and something I've noticed come up in discussion often is how little Dash has talked about the Wonderbolts this season. The only time I can think of off the top of my head is when they came to try and stop Spike from destroying the town, and failed miserably. I still think she idolizes Spitfire and Soarin, but not in a way that she wants to join their ranks anymore. Maybe meet them and get some autographs or a chance to fly with them, but that's all.
Thanks for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
571188 Yeah, those were my thoughts, too.
I like this series you got over here as a whole. You really got some good characterization going on in these stories.
As much as I like clopfics....I feel that this was maybe rushed a bit too much. As a Dash fan myself, I can see apparent that there may be some minimal events missing. Also, yeah, kind of a text wall as times, maybe break it up a little?
Well, anyway, still great job on this story, and of the previous chapters too of this.
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Rainbow saved Rarity when she was falling. GAH!
Good writing. Glad that Dash gets the love too.
Who's next?
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Hard to say, honestly. I've been kicking around a story with Rarity for a while, but I never got around to it and the mood kind of left me. I usually write the stories if I have a particular character bugging me for most of a day, and today just happened to be Rainbow. We'll see what form inspiration takes in the future.
Thanks for reading!
Awesomeness, I can't get enough of Romance w/ Rainbow Dash stories.
HumanXDash is definitely my favorite ship. I don't know why, but it is.
Anyway, this definitely takes the cake for "My Favorite Rainbow Dash Clops With Humans In Them"
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571311 I was gonna post that last night, but then my internet crapped out. Oh well! At least the joke was planted.
EDIT: Yes. Best pony.
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I have to admit, I'm starting to see where the "ship Rainbow Dash with everything!" comes from. It's very fun to write about her having sex. Especially with her being submissive. Glad you liked it.
DAMN...THIS WAS AWESOME!!!!!
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Fucking sweet.
588546 I agree with ALL THE THE THINGS, that you posted. All of them, it's like, scary, man.
588275 Is that a guy in a HAZMAT suit getting jiggy wit it?
588564 AYE, MATEY. KEEP A SHARP EYE OUT FOR THOSE NINJA-ALIENS... OTHERWISE KNOWN AS SUPER SAIYANS....
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Not a HAZMAT. The suit is used by E.O.D. (Explosive Ordinance Disposal) to stop bomb fragmentation.
588767 Ah, thank you... So, is that the victory dance of his people?
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Yes, it is indeed.
This is the dance.
The Safety Dance!
588823 AAHAAAHAHAHA~! xD
That was brilliantly random.
Kudos.
~Jack
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That is all.
"You Will Never Share an Intimate Moment with Rainbow Dash"
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Hello old friend...
Except for the "You will never" part...
in b4 "You will never share an intimate moment with "
you just know she'd abduct the first random human Twilight zaps in before he gets sent home. It gets boring being immortal, ya know! Well unless you're goofy like me and never tire of wargames and hopping around the net and blowing things up. I would totally dig it.
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I've thought about it, but honestly... I don't think there'd be a point to it. I've already done a few chapters of Molestia, and I'll probably keep doing more, so there's no reason to give her a YWN.
Not unless a large number of readers asked for it...
625533
Ah alrighty. I figured you had one alone planned but I can see her basically just slamming into someone else's story and taking it over too.
How about one with after you finish with the mains or whenever it strikes you? I know she doesn't crop up on cloppers' radar (clopdar?) often so that might be an interesting idea. It's definitely got some elements that won't be available for others, like having the person pose as part of the foreplay process, or taking pictures of their time together. It can also go either way, as overly business-like (just another photo shoot, with benefits) or disgustingly sweet (revealing her true nature when not basking in the limelight)
I love the way this is written and it also kind of surprised me because the title of the series implies (at least to me) it would have been of a partially trolly nature where it gets interrupted before anything happens.
I'm not experienced enough with certain writing styles to give certain kinds of fics a go so I just like to throw around ideas when I do land upon something that interests me. Everything under my belt prior to mlp is war scenes/series (Wing Commander, X-com, Exo-squad, Strife, Battletech, etc) and so I wouldn't be able to resist throwing random pitched battles into the damned things after a few hundred words. That might be funny for comedic troll purposes one day though.
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Still waiting for another chapter...
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But writing is harrrrrrd. I have to do stuff to make it happen. :<
We'll see. I update this story pretty randomly to be honest.
its dashie time!
687041 Implying that this is a story?
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Oh ho ho ho!
714044 If there's a chapter with Luna (my main hope is for Lyra though), could you add something about bananas, and end it with her getting shot to the moon?
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"I'm just really sensitive there...
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IT HAD TO BE DONE! XD
725722 I'm actually not sure what you mean.
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>Distracting personal condition that needs immediate attention
I actually had to read that a few times to understand that. I must be off my game today. Have fun!
Eh, I may or may not. This is kind of like my scrap pile, or more specifically "I want to write sexy things about a certain character, but I don't have a good story in mind for it" I could expand it more, but I'd honestly rather concentrate on improving my other stories, or creating completely new ones.
Thank you for the review, I love getting them!
More please ...um, if that's.. well, you know..
I think you've got it just right. Personally I love seeing Dash being forward, yet all unsure and blushy about it. It fits so well.
Oh my gosh! I think my pant got a bit tighter after reading this. I love how Rainbow is such a tease! She cant be quite the girlish type that nopony ever gets to see! MLP personality test says im a lot like Rainbow Dash and I must give you credit for this very fine piece of work! Love the foreplay you started out with!